it has potential but you really need to rewrite it cause of alot of problems that makes me lazy to write

what is this ?

man introduce the technique name then explain them like the old man gave him two technique then you ended it with no nane mentioned then you explained lighting body technique that's ok but the second one is a spell you said a technique while the meaning you delivered is techniques for cultivting your power and spells for using that power be precise in such things cause it gives headache when trying to understand the info you give and sometimes no usually things are misunderstood

if you have a group of pencils and a pen and you pick one pencil then some told to pick another one means you pick a different pencil but if told to pick the other this means the pen this is the difference between another and other cause you repeated it alot in this chapter

the other one then

shouldn't all stats reach 20 since all raised by one per level ?

str too

int didn't increase

man it's getting worse

class holder then why holders if only one reached 2000 combat power

is it the system that is the mc or what ?

like if he can be banned that easily while no mistakes he has done from a game that empowers reality then it's a joke and a forced plot you know you kinda made about several consecutive forced plot mr author i actually got annoyed so srry i break up here

nah i feel like it's messed-up

than

well he should feel the change you know triple the amount of energy or 20 percent increase in health anyone should feel it bro or the system holds that for him well then it isn't a system made by a scientist here if it happens

well beside talent that gives stats why no stat with absorbing stones too ? he can increase all stats of all other attributes but int only with level ? balance things author

denger sense?

well better say soul power or soul cultivation anything similar because otherwise means he is dead no?

yah only few days

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