it is good but better don't make much a dramatic change as an example of earth being destroyed because rudra died well this just removed all the hype you made in the first version as even though his son and daughter died you whould that he will take revenge with the mind of removing werewolf from the existence what's more there must be a traitor to attach his residence so smoothly so how can he not notice even though he is in rage please remake that part as it just like you are burning the pervious novel to power up this one where you forgot that you hinted that the unnamed god was the reason for rebirth can he not forsee this you will say yah but max was reincarnated no that timeline of hard is dead no change can happen if so can't the enemy do this too you messed-up alot of things by doing this as the restrictions are not enough for not even tier 10 should easily do it there are many other things that just make not continuing with this novel now
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