Review Detail of Mylittledragon in MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God

Item: MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
Rating: 4.4

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MylittledragonLv31yrMylittledragon

Hi author, this is a great novel you have here, and I like your writing style, but author can you, maybe, get an editor?? Because the punctuation is so bad. for instance you write something like "hey, Max". Instead of something like this: "Hey, Max." the period is supposed to be in inside the quotation. have spot some other mistake as well but that would make this review longer. Author I really like this book and your writing style, so I'm suggesting you go to YouTube and search "how to use comma and other punctuation videos" assure you you would be a master within weeks

MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God

Raj_Shah_7152

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Raj_Shah_7152AuthorRaj_Shah_7152

Thankyou for the suggestion, I will try learn it, I do run my chapters past grammarly before publishing knowing full well that I'm weak in this aspect But listening to you, I realise it's not enough

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MylittledragonLv3Mylittledragon

yeah, I really suggest you watch the videos it's really helpful

Raj_Shah_7152:Thankyou for the suggestion, I will try learn it, I do run my chapters past grammarly before publishing knowing full well that I'm weak in this aspect But listening to you, I realise it's not enough

1yr

HelValkyrjaLv2HelValkyrja

Hi, I would appreciate it if you check out my new novel ABOMINATION, really value the support and critiques. The first three chapters set it🤩 so give it a try and let me know.

1yr

Mayowa_DamilareLv10Mayowa_Damilare

just wanted to inform everyone of this awesome novel.I feel that it deserves more audienceit is truly a wonderful novel, one of a kind.i believe that anyone who decides to give this novel a chance after seeing this won't regret it.I don't know why I can't vote more than 3 times a day, i would have given the book all my power stones.but what a pity I can only vote with 3 power stones a day, anyways this is truly a wonderful novel.the name of the novel is:Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled

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