Eternal_Demon
He got a special system...he didnt know function....he was threatened by system. Due his transmigration he had to do everything to save his soul...he got underlings, closed to his sister, became from loser to something else...and his system brought him suprise....everyone could use only one element, how about to use more than one? And if you go on journey, take your home :)
The story is well written (although the setting is similar to some other novels). The beginning was slow-paced and had very little character development and world background(which is still a lot lacking), but the story progression was fine so no complaints. The MC sometimes acts like a dense-headed Dunce who lacks a presence of mind but it's funny that way and his situational awareness is good. Since the system is a shop type the business aspect felt a bit lacking since it was mostly used to suppress powerful people and also it is a lot less talkative and doesn't help much( asking a low IQ MC to figure out its functions on his own is like asking a newborn baby to walk) The magic and spell system and world background and development leave a lot to be desired. Let's just hope new worlds are not introduced when the MC has not even explored the 1% of his current word. All in all, I like it and was worth reading. (Evaluation after reading 163 chapters)
As the person (prob) who first read this in its draft stages, I can proudly say, it has gotten a long way since. The author had racked his brain and dashed out these nice chapters. So you are gonna say, βSystem, magic, etc. So cliche.β But, think about it. Nowadays, nothing isnβt cliche, just that little difference, that little change, the unexpectedness of what how your tracing of the story might be wrong, these small differences make it interesting, engaging, and fun. Now real review: as I said I have long since read a couple chapters of this novel and itβs really good. The Mc isnβt dumb, the novel didnβt start with an uncaring Mc, the systemβs limits on the user and the threat of death of he doesnβt do as it says before the timer ends make it fun to see if he will make it in time. And the Mcβs attachment to the family and listening to them as they care about him is also very nice. To not spoil Iβll stop here. **: I highly recommend giving it a try and helping the author via: powerstones, comments, reviews, or coins if/when the novel becomes contracted.
This one is actually easy to read. The MC is a genuine guy who while he has his moments of stupidity are very few and each character is well developed and there is no super annoying chick who comes along mid way to completely destroy the feel of the story. Itβs well written with only a small amount of grammatical errors. All up- really happy with this story.
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