Blood_Fang
Authors don't look at my profile if it is trash. If you do look at my profile and have a trash novel you know what to do right. (Hint: my profile picture will tell you) Put the trash in the trash can.
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May for take your soul im jot ready yet (Builds 30 ft underground base to fall inside a nuclear base and go boom) God: Who gives a truck. (God's answer to his question) I Don't give a truck i give man lightning shark and truck I am very generous (Side note - To your death)
This is a comment mainly for the author. I feel like the villain element is lacking as you say that this book will not lack villain atribute but a true villain would do things not even the devil would do athe main character in your book is held back by your morals as you let them be free for the most part but I cannot say that the main character is a true villain. I do have to aploud you 👏👏👏as you are doing a better job at displaying a villain like character than all the novel writer I have seen. You have not beat them by a small margin you bet them by a league. So this is a good novel but it just falls short of some of the expectations I have for the villain.
at the same time his race is only B rank if it was too overpowered than their would be no point of the pregouse story
you use the same word way to often but overall it's pretty good but the then 10 million times ruins it for those who care about the qoulitynof the words used.
to be honest I wouldn't recommend this much and I might abandon this most likely as I am only doing this cause I just want to type things I am not ganna use mutch description and this is probably not tou guyses type of book so no bad comments and I told yah of you dont like this also you guys can copy the plot if you want I dont realy care as long as you guys make it better and leave me the name at the bottom.