Slushy_Apollo
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Slushy_Apollo11hCommented"You will be going home tomorrow, right? I want some memories before you go," Anko said lustfully.- Slushy_Apollo11hCommented
Proper term is a newbie or rookie not a virgin
"But is it alright for you to go out?" Gintoki was worried about Haru. Even though Haru had learned magic, but in the battlefield, Haru was a virgin and that was the reason why he didn't feel that good to let him to go out. - Slushy_Apollo16hCommented
Reclaim should be claim
"It's simple. I made it with love." Touma replied which made her eyebrow twitch. He smiled and moved his head beside her ear. "Don't forget our bet. I will reclaim my rewards later." - Slushy_Apollo16hCommented
Retort
Lord Phenex was about to retorque but widened his eyes in horror when he found himself unable to move. - Slushy_Apollo17hCommented
The devils kill each other in rating games quite often and just use the excuse accidents happen
It was too lethal for the devils and he could accidentally kill someone, which is something he doesn't desire, as it will cause tons of trouble for him. - Slushy_Apollo17hCommented
That is an insult to the phoenix since riser is just a flaming chicken
(AN: KFP = Kentucky Fried Phoenix.) - Slushy_Apollo18hCommented
Manic smile
"Bingo! Bingo! You guessed right!" The man clapped his hands with a maniac smile on his face. "It seems you are knowledgeable about this side of the world, maybe I should have expected from someone who lives with those devil scums!" - Slushy_Apollo18hCommented
Steal the perverts gear or maybe divine dividing
[Perfected Sacred Gear Stealer (DxD)] - Slushy_Apollo19hCommented
Your should be changed to you’re
This paragraph has been deleted. - Slushy_Apollo1dCommentedCh 45 ScreamdetailRiches and Bitches: I have a gate to an isekai and leveling-up system!Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
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I would summon more right before skipping back to his own planet
Now Sullivan had a problem even with his three servants. His power was still too high. He wanted to summon more servants but the problem would be that if he summoned more. - Slushy_Apollo1dCommented
Artoria is spelled wrong here
She was the mother of Modred and the sister of Arthoria Pendragon. Morgan Le Fay possessed a complex and intriguing backstory and was often portrayed as a powerful sorceress with conflicting loyalties. Her connection to Arthurian legends added depth to her character, making her an enigmatic figure in the Fate series. - Slushy_Apollo1dCommented
The heaven shivered process is confusing unless I missed something
Were the Yokais holding onto the box? The heaven shivered process as her beautiful lips stretched, revealing rows of sharp teeth under. Her green eyes held a bright glint in them, like the brilliant light of Venus before the sun's rise. - Slushy_Apollo2dCommented
Waver right now
Waver wisely disappeared when none of us was looking. - Slushy_Apollo2dCommented
The little psycho is acting cute
If Salem and I weren't watching, I bet Cinder would have skipped away happily. - Slushy_Apollo3dCommented
Sis cons meet
The young man looked at Haru's back and felt quite grateful for the side dish which Haru had given since he was very hungry. Inserting his hand inside his pocket, he had only a little money left. This money was for breakfast tomorrow, but since he had eaten quite a lot since Haru had given him a side dish. He decided to buy manga for his little sister who was in the hospital. Picking up a manga on the magazine corner, he was wondering why it was so expensive. But even so, he would buy it for her since he knew that staying all the time in the hospital would be very boring and he hoped this manga could become some entertainment for his only little sister. - Slushy_Apollo4dCommented
To start learning but the novel name is legit genius doctor reborn
She didn't know if it was too late for her to start learning medicine now.detailAfter Her Rebirth, the Genius Doctor Is Pampered to the ExtremeHistorical Romance · Jasmine Osmunda - Slushy_Apollo4dCommented
Why not use the metal from the dockyard that way you have backup metal inside the carrier
Therefore, Lin Chen resolutely chose to press the upgrade button on the interface. - Slushy_Apollo4dCommented
I would laugh so hard if things were delayed by 1-2 days
"Cyber Armageddon is coming!" - Slushy_Apollo4dCommented
Can’t wait for more
(Author's Note: Good news everyone! I finally got a computer that can run extremely modded Skyrim and I'll be able to record my own content regarding mods I'm interested in incorporating in the story. No longer shall I have to sift through YouTube reviews and playthroughs for the dialogues I need! Tis a glorious day! So have an extra chapter as a thank you to those who have been commenting and binge reading the story so far!)