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Sarath_Veda

Sarath_Veda

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2021-06-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda7mth
    Posted

    Good novel to read. Need some improvements and it will be 4.5 stars.

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    Life Simulation: Add Tags Starting with Wellness Technique
    Eastern · Midnight Beast
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda7mth
    Commented

    dropping. why would he make a bet with family life on-line and mc thinks he has to do everything to protect his family (disappointing)

    Without wasting a second, Lyrian responded, "I accept!"
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    Rebirth Of The Strongest Worldsmith
    Fantasy · WriterTheos
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda8mth
    Commented

    no

    no
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    Marvel: Infinity
    Anime & Comics · Abyssuit
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda1yr
    Replied to Echii_Sama

    Isn't the whole point of AOT, is curse of Ymir, otherwise everybody would have become a titan.

    Ch 3 The beginning of the journey
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    Infinite Worlds: Attack on Titan
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda1yr
    Commented

    what's with sudden change, out of nowhere. If he were change over a period of it would have good, its like reading completely different novel with sudden change. These sudden changes causes reader to lose interest to read any further. I mean make him leacher from the start or slowly in to story. These types of writing causing Author to lose credibility from writters.

    Ch 24 Better Offer
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    My Multisystem In Isekai
    Fantasy · different_minds
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda1yr
    Commented

    why do many author's describe a child ( here it is 4 year old ) as handsome and most striking in the family blah blah blah blah like this. I mean he is a small child isn't it better to describe him as cute kid enough. I am not criticizing author, It just came to mind so expressed it.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: The valued guest of the Xiao family
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    BTTH Life Simulator System
    Anime & Comics · Kisshot
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda1yr
    Replied to Echii_Sama

    I think titan shifters live only for 12 or 13 years of life. Isn't it also a sure way to reduce his life span. Surely you're is good for fighting using susanoo, but it can only used a last option as MC wants to live without reducing the life span.

    Ch 3 The beginning of the journey
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    Infinite Worlds: Attack on Titan
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda1yr
    Commented

    what about sharingan's others powers like sasuke's amaterasu.

    Ch 3 The beginning of the journey
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    Infinite Worlds: Attack on Titan
    Anime & Comics · SrCuervo
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Posted

    Comedy scenes were not funny at all. Although the scenes were meant to be funny, the way they were narrated in novel were very plain and sometimes stupid. World background was very bad. There are many plot holes in the story.

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    I Am Loaded with Passive Skills
    Eastern · Eat Apples Late at Night
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Commented

    Compared to others, those ignots were free for him when he killed a beast. So instead of been b*****y about that, he should thank system.

    Ch 19 Personal Boss, Equipment Dropped!
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    I Got Stronger By Using Copper Coins Until I Am Invincible
    Eastern · White Foxes Are Not White
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Commented

    Very stupid.

    Ch 6 The God Of Entertainment
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    The System Of Infinity
    Fantasy · BlackFlamer
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Replied to Grenhaer

    Are you an idoit? I am just pointing out that, there is no need for unnecessary massacre in the very earlier chapter and that it was first fight with humans ( like i said over a small argument). I too love MC who kills his enemies but that was along the story, not at his first interaction with humans ( this behavior is what i pointed out as psycho). First read it and give your opinions.

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    Reincarnated in the world of One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Mario_Walker
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Commented

    Very stupid. He should have atleast warned nearby city through other people about teleportation array in spatial ring.

    Ch 125 The Day the Seven Stars Alignment Descended
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    Zero To Hero In The Martial Arts Library
    Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Posted

    One of the best trash and brainless fanfic. MC says to others that they were all TV or Anime characters in his world, others accept their reality then and there on spot. He literally says their future to them, in exchange of some gifts (aka powers) - worst concept for a story.

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    Super Dimensional Guild
    Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Posted

    Writing was good. Concept of story and the way scenes were executed were also good. Nothing much to criticize, except for the story been very boring and plain. It's like eating nicely steamed and cooked bowl of plain rice everyday without any curry or side dishes. very boring.......

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    Magic Shop System
    Fantasy · Eternal_Demon
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Commented

    what about bonus reward for Emergency Quest 1?

    Ch 43 Unlocking exclusive weapons
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    Weapon seller in the world of magic
    Eastern · Snowstar
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Posted

    Trash. Novel with No Brain MC. He want to give a powerful devil fruit instead of using himself as he had a chance to use 2 devil fruits. Just to prove MC power, Author massacre a branch with hundreds of Marnie over a little argument of 'why is he using pirate flag'. I mean he should have hosted the flag after going into sea and avoid a needless conflict. Author says that MC in his previous life he was anti-social. If you ask me, Mc is borderline psychopath who kills for little arguments.

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    Reincarnated in the world of One Piece
    Anime & Comics · Mario_Walker
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Posted

    There was nothing new in this fanfic. This is just a copy of original one piece story, where MC is just an additional character in story that changes nothing. He is luffy's loyal lackey and luffy is always strong, even though MC trains harder and has cheats.

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    The Shinobi of Straw Hats
    Anime & Comics · PeekACoo
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Posted

    Read only 30+, so I don't know what happens in later chapters. Story is very childish. MC acts like he 10~12 yr old. He wants commit suicide because he is evaluated as 'No Seed' without a thought for family or friends. Which is main drawback, as it dampens reader mood and makes them have bad impression for later chapters.

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    The Cheat Seed
    Fantasy · Sinadin
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  • Sarath_Veda
    Sarath_Veda2yr
    Posted

    Although he calls country dragonland showing some racism, but i don't think there was much of problem with that ( I mean many people want to show off about their country being great N all than other countries ). The story was good at first few chapters, then it was no fun from later chapters. Plot of story doesn't do any justification to title of novel. There were not any good points to story. Finally, bad story.

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    Global Game: I Can Absorb Luck
    Sci-fi · Don't Ask Me to Game
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