Reviews of Is that a Wisp?
Is that a Wisp?
Suiyan
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- Character Design
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My main gripe with the story however is grammar, spelling, and phrasing. The first 20 chapters or so weren't terrible, you can definitely read passed them. Minor errors are expected on a platform that you are requires to release a chapter or two a day to be popular. The issue is the latest chapters. They read like a poorly translated novel. If they can be edited to at least the same standard of the previous chapters, I wouldn't have a problem. That being said, I do think this can reach the top ranks of Web Novel given time. The story draws you in quickly even with all it's tropes and deadpan humor. I do think to get their the writer will have to make sure to maintain the standard of the writing they've done so far as well as hopefully going back and fixing grammar issues overtime
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I tried to read this, I really did. However, the grammar and word usage is so atrocious that it's almost unreadable at times. It got to the point that I was getting headaches. I don't have issues with how OP the character is, but maybe try to make it hard for him once in a while? In conclusion it's definitely average fare, but made way worse by the grammar or translation or whatever.
Dull, boring, repetitive. First chapters looked interesting and fresh. But very fast everything came down to "just yet another generic novel". There is no goal, no conflict, no struggles, no mysteries. Nothing. The whole story about MC undertakes missions "go from place A to place B and retrieve some thing", participates in dull fightings with small flies and explores dungeon. And everything endlessly repeats itself from city to city, from universe to universe, from realm to realm: the same events, the same organisations and guilds, even the phrases and "jokes" the same (if you consider calling someone idiot to be a joke in the first place). Out of the blue fantasy world have technologies, but not all - just internet, smartphones and computers and spaceships, while lacking necessary science foundation and necessary infrastructure. There aren't even cars. Author's world have spaceships while not have cars and everything else our own civilization have. This setting looks very crude, artificial and untrue. Author was just lazy to make up fantasy substitution for technologies but also doesn't bother to properly integrate technologies in the setting. "MC needs a way to long distance communication? Well, here is a smartphones" - that's author's attitude. The whole novel about monotonous grind with little amount of boring fights. That's all.
Started out great then the story just crashed and burned. MC is introduced as a smart character but his IQ keeps dropping as the story goes on. Author introduces new characters that just walk all over him .The comedy is forced and annoying mainly about him having low EQ and getting walked all over his friends.
Easily one of the best novels I've ever read. The author review is pretty spot on. I've seen complaints about Krune's low EQ and how the other characters pick on him sometimes because of that. The whole rainbow thing is a little bit exagerated, but not to the point where it ruins the story in any way. Another great work by Suiyan. If by any chance you haven't read this novel and/or Death... and me, I definitely recommend both
