Review Detail of DaoistBJO959 in Is that a Wisp?

I tried to read this, I really did. However, the grammar and word usage is so atrocious that it's almost unreadable at times. It got to the point that I was getting headaches. I don't have issues with how OP the character is, but maybe try to make it hard for him once in a while? In conclusion it's definitely average fare, but made way worse by the grammar or translation or whatever.