Crook_Shank
well the way character before reincarnation is bad, first how can someone become sole survivor of plane crash with only minimal injury (I say this because he can tend his wounds alone after miraculous safe from plane crash) after that he go back to home he all his family died and he become some sort of criminal (typical boss discarded his hunting dog because interest) and he then he go all the way to basically genocide his entire species with nuclear war witch I don't know how can he have them in the first place (it's either that world security is suck or he is that good at doing his thing, most likely the former). then the way he reincarnated he is supposed to be punished but instead got reincarnated as naruto! hell he even get cheat given by mostly evil goodness for being amusing not because she pity him like seriously who will pity someone who genocide his own race?. after reincarnated as naruto many questions appearing like why go out from kononha just to go back and become genin there ? how no one questioned how can he become strong? knowing something that he suppose not to know? and many more what I can say is plot mostly forced to as close as possible to cannon he didn't even have goal, or even his goal is to change konoha why though? he didn't have any ties in there
WQ-3 stars Just your average fanfic in webnovel, not good, not bad SD-3 stars pretty meh, it'll be better if the author don't treat ninjas as ignorant, mc always hide his training then all of a sudden displayed all his cards/abilities CD-2 stars MC is cringe factory, with tons of salt and edgyness US-4 stars pretty consistent so far WH-5 stars it's narutoverse, can't go wrong with that
This fanfic is good and there's a little mistake like the spelling, and the paragraph you just need to write 5 sentences each paragraph, but if your writing on your computer make it 3-4 sentences or 2 sentences each paragraph so it will look good and easy to read and pinpoint the spelling mistakes,overall it's a good fanfic
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Extremely nerfed the more more fruit, portrays mc as smart but when stuff that matters like gaining the rennigan comes up hes dumb, and the power levels are inconsistent At one moment the author says that with The chakra cloak alone mc can be high kage level but the moment he says that even with the chakra cloak, the mangetyo sharingan, and the more more fruit (nerfed) at 30x he can barely achieve mid kage.