Below average fic where the story revolves around the system. Mc receives so many rewards it's absurd. The only thing that's going for this fic is grammar...

This is some bs story, I can't relate to anything at all, especially when the world revolves around hentai... I don't watch that, there's no info about those hentai characters on google and who cares about the story in a hentai anyway? That's a new low I don't plan to cross...

He doesn't want to replace Hedwig.... Dude, he doesn't have anything to replace with to begin with!

How can people take an interesting idea from the unique fanfic who failed due to overpowered mc and then create even worse fanfic where mc is even more overpowered for no apparent reason with a dogshit harem story? Degeneracy at it's finest.

Fascinating, the story didn't start yet and I already hate it.

So short!

So bland😑

I just realized something, if he made a shadow clone, would his regeneration still exist? If so technically he could make infinite amount of clones who do not ran out of chakra...

Well mc really is full of himself now, being self important and all

Why is his hair red? He is a half senju and half uchiha...

The author is probably a teenager, even if he tries to show dept in the story, in reality the story becomes even more superficial. The quetes in each chapter are super unnecessary. This is an ideological ff where author wants to teach you how to think about the world... As if he knows better... Even his main character knows better - he is a bad example xd

Aharingan doesn't work like that, once it's activated it's activated, people don't experience flashbacks with each activation, otherwise kakashi wouldn't even recover.

It's a good fanfic, but let's get real, mc doesn't have time powers, he has the limited ability of transfering his consciousness to his previous self and somehow each use uses up all his spiritual energy (for example he wanted to return 1 hour to the past). This is annoying, because you can do so much with time powers: stop, slow barier (jjk six eyes), gravity (because gravity is a combination of space and time), recovery, bring back from the dead, time paradox explosions (delete button) and etc, the imagination is the limit..

Now... As a reincarnator the first choise would be to obviously use his ability and make himself not an orphan, I don't understand why author chose to limit mc ability, because this limit makes no sense. If this ability used chakra I would understand, but it doesn't.

So stupid, why would he do that. And more so - no consequences.....

Why are fanfic writers always make the same old au, why can't they just idk... Not change anything in hp world? At least in original hp mc could fix things, but now there's nothing left to fix.

I guess he used conquerers haki to change their minds? That's not how haki works....

What is Enkai and Netsukai.....

You should be crusified for this shit. ........................................................ ........................................................