Reviews of I Reincarnated In Twilight
I Reincarnated In Twilight
Roh594
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Please continue the novel tho i can't tell of it was good or bad it still pretty entertaining for one to read Tho i give 3 Good luck[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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amazing story, I've reread it twice now and am planing on a third. the characters are fun the romance is enjoyable. The only problem I have is that there are a lot of run on sentences, but apart from that I only have a childish complaint to make, and that's that the author does not update as often as I would like. but then again his chapters are quite a bit longer than the average chapter on this app. so if the author by chance reads this please continue writing.
I gave up reading after the seventh chapter. One of the major flaws is the grammar - every paragraph is one sentence. i tried reading, ignoring the mistakes, but the missing commas and periods are too much to ignore. Sure, this can be your first novel, but don’t be forgetting basic sentence structure a ten year old can remember.
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Not the worst writing I've seen me on this site. it's a great story and I just want to want more. im going to reread the current chapters while waiting for the next update. it's so nostalgic when I remember all these characters and not I get to see the story in a new light. it funny but serious, it is well thought out and planned in my opinion and things are balanced. Don't stop writing ever is what I want to say but make sure to do everything in moderation. a lot of writers on this site tire themselves with the constant upkeep of chapters that they either get writer's block or just put out something that popped into their head. Don't turn a hobby into something stressful because then you won't enjoy it. Have a plan or at least a general direction you want to go and do things in moderation if you need to rest or a break, take a break. and if you ever get hate mail or Anything which is sometimes common on sites like these, just know there are 1000 times more people that love your work than hate or dislike it. For some reason, people blame writers for making something they don't like. if you don't like something don't read it, I don't like harem so I avoid it, I don't purposefully leave negative reviews on harem because I dislike it, because I know the story is made for a different audience. the writers write what they enjoy and want In a story and the readers get to see their vision and imagination come true through the use of words. I absolutely love the story and can't wait for more[img=update][img=update][img=update]. have a nice day to anyone who reads this. 😄
Believe me mate, your fanfic is great. I truly mean that. The way you write also makes it enjoyable to read. The interaction between characters, the dialogues between them and the pace you're going doesn't seem rushed, it perfectly fits in the place. I also read the new fanfic Twilight Dawn, but the way it was written looked very fast paced and rushed. The interaction between characters also feels.quite stiff if I say so. Overall I wanted to say that, your fanfic is way better and can even be said to be one of the best Twilight fanfic there is, if you don't drop it. I would really love to read your new chapter. I hope you don't drop it. ThankYou.
I like the story so far but I think that the author went a bit far in repeating the same scene multiple times just to add more words to the chapter and honestly when that started I directly ignored the rest of the chapter and started a new one heck I don't think anyone would waist time to reread and reread again just to read it in different POV the current development is going well but there's few blank spots that couldn't be explained for example from where did he get all that money to make his technology , did he hack banks to transfer the money ? or manipulated stocks ? and how did all his equipment fit inside the basement? and he made unnecessary problems for himself buy telling his skills to Rosalie ( Edweird read her mind and he'll go to the volturi and Ao will read him and then MC gets exposed And I don't think he can block memories from being read unless he became a vamp ) well to the author I don't mean to criticize you or insult you I'm just giving my opinion about the novel and I hope that you'll continue writing and good luck
