Review Detail of Khaled_Sellami in I Reincarnated In Twilight

I like the story so far but I think that the author went a bit far in repeating the same scene multiple times just to add more words to the chapter and honestly when that started I directly ignored the rest of the chapter and started a new one heck I don't think anyone would waist time to reread and reread again just to read it in different POV the current development is going well but there's few blank spots that couldn't be explained for example from where did he get all that money to make his technology , did he hack banks to transfer the money ? or manipulated stocks ? and how did all his equipment fit inside the basement? and he made unnecessary problems for himself buy telling his skills to Rosalie ( Edweird read her mind and he'll go to the volturi and Ao will read him and then MC gets exposed And I don't think he can block memories from being read unless he became a vamp ) well to the author I don't mean to criticize you or insult you I'm just giving my opinion about the novel and I hope that you'll continue writing and good luck