Review Detail of PrimorDious in I Reincarnated In Twilight

Believe me mate, your fanfic is great. I truly mean that. The way you write also makes it enjoyable to read. The interaction between characters, the dialogues between them and the pace you're going doesn't seem rushed, it perfectly fits in the place. I also read the new fanfic Twilight Dawn, but the way it was written looked very fast paced and rushed. The interaction between characters also feels.quite stiff if I say so. Overall I wanted to say that, your fanfic is way better and can even be said to be one of the best Twilight fanfic there is, if you don't drop it. I would really love to read your new chapter. I hope you don't drop it. ThankYou.