Overlord_Venus
I have read 17 chapters and I think I understand the content and purpose in general. I might have loved this novel if I hadn't been a fan of the darker and more brutal protagonist.it has a well thought out scenario about the purpose and meaning of a system, I am sure it will be a very entertaining novel for those who like adventures in different worlds. If I were to speak for myself, I didn't really warm to the novel. I guess these kinds of novels don't appeal to me because I've read and tried so many different novels. I found the background of the main character and the depth of the side characters a bit weak. Maybe the author is improving it in the future, I don't know.The depth of a character is what motivates me to read any novel, so when I read MC's purpose and tried to feel his emotions, it felt a bit inadequate.
I really liked the writing so far and this could definitely become a great nivel, just ine small critisism: Very miner spoiler: I wouldnt use the oerspective of the antagonist as often, especially the second time is very unnecessary, since we were tould what happend before and then you let us sit through 1,5 chapters that didnt really add anything, sonce everybody who reads this nivel is already going to be familiar with systems. Also i just dont want to follow an unlikable character for that long, I would focus mirr in the mc. Still, this has a lot of potential, keep it up :)
gonna guve this review 5 star.The author maybe dead but his work is absplute masterpiece. His work is side by side standing alongside reverend insanity,lord of mysteries,Omniscient readers point of view,FFF class trash hero,,Everyone else is a returnee.definitely a must try.1)Multiple power system both unique and common.But the main attraction is the systemss power system.2)Powerful villains. meaning not only brawn but also brain. (but lacks in comprasion Reverend insanity)3)Dives into pretty much every genre.4)You wouldnt stand system genre anymore after this read.5) a unique novel with a new story.
This book is innovative. But i'm stuck at chapter 25 and can't continue it. Here are its pros : - The book has original ideas - The Mc is smart - There are many worlds to visit( those who like world-hopping might like that) - The author is active in the comments - The updates are regulars - The writing quality is one of the best on this app Now, the cons : - The characters are unappealing. Honestly, despite knowing the Mc’s goal and despite the prospect of having many other worlds to visit , i didn’t feel interested enough to continue reading. And this is mainly due to the Mc. He doesn't show much personality and is boring .( Even if you wanted him to be a loner most of the time, you could have given him entertaining thoughts, author) It's like he exists only to be an excuse for us to discover the fabulous world that the author has created. What about side characters then? they are worse than the Mc. The book sure does have a good plot. But with characters as shallow, the interest one might have for it is quickly overshadowed by the boredom brought by the characters themselves, and the realisation that they only exist to drive the plot. - The pace is slow. This might equally be a good thing for some. However for me , this-together with the shabby characters - only reinforce the feeling of boredom. - The tone of the book is uniforme. The book always feels serious and it's also boring . Author, you could have tried to write some comic moments to break a bit the feeling of monotony the book gives. Overall , this book doesn't lack ideas but feelings . I sincerely pray for the author's improvement in this area. Also, i hope that i didn’t sound harsh to you ( author) while writing this review. Good luck with your work!
Not gonna lie, but the system Origin and what they do is clearly explained in the novel SOUL OF NEGARY. If you are talking about intelligence and scheming, Negary tops second only to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. Gotta say, compared to those guys, this MC is a chick and mostly relies on Luck, which is illusory. You could have tried to solidify it.
I really liked this novel, read it to the current ch 612, what makes this novel so interesting is that it puts a spin on the system genre and makes it more believeble. When i read it i get the feeling that what the author writes makes sense and answers question you get when reading normal systems novel. If i had any thing i didnt like about the novel (no spoilers) it would be when the mc leaves the cultivation world, it is interesting and want to see what the author does with it but i would have preffered if it didnt happen, maybe he can make me change my opinion with the future chapters.
This novel spoiled the fun in reading system novels for me. For starters, the systems are the big bad guys who do evil things. And the story development and author’s writing made me believe so. The characters and plot development are very true to the concept and you won’t feel any averseness while reading the book. In short,I like this book. If you want to experience something new other than the typical system novels, I recommend you this book. Thank you author for your wonderful work.