another stupid teen romance with cum instead of brains. There is no plot, full of cliches, all the characters are made of shit. I do not recommend to anyone
good book for those who like to eat shit........... good book for those who like to eat shit........... good book for those who like to eat shit...........
this is a very good fanfiction. The plot is interesting and the main character is not a beta male. I hope that some Chinese clichés and pretending will not be adapted for an English-speaking audience. It would be nice if the plot moved logically and not too slowly. After all, Chinese writers abuse a lot of unnecessary information. And so everything is fine. Continue in the same spirit. English is not my native language
Everything was fine until chapter 39. There are too many bots in the reviews How do you annoy me you stupid bastard. to create a good foundation you need to use good technique from scratch. Because of some competition to sacrifice the future. What a fool you are. Intelligence at the level of secondary characters. Cannon fodder.
I had hopes for this but they did not come true. too disappointing. Even after 100 chapters, the protagonist has level 1 cultivation. 90% of the text is useless crap. The main character is naive and stupid. You can not talk about racism and Nazism at all. Another garbage at the level CHINA is the best country and the rest of the countries are bad. I do not advise. (English is not my native language)
It takes a lot of hard work to write shit like this. I will ignore grammar and content issues. But the plot is the most banal. Starting from the very beginning, where did the terrorists come from in the forest? Why are all the characters stupid? Why do daughters/grandchildren of powerful people have so little protection. Why are all of them "accidentally" saved by the protagonist. The feeling that they are made of cardboard and they painted faces. No character development. The plot armor and the power of the plot is all this novel has. The main characters are like Pokemon. The actions of the protagonist are arrogant and irrational. For example, in chapter 35, the guards were fired just like that, although they were just doing their job. The whole plot is filled with the words "the main character is right and the rest who disagree with him are villains." This shitty novel even continues to be released to this day and is a cash cow. (English is not my native language) This book for schoolchildren 12-16 years old with sperm toxicity who have just entered puberty.
another rubbish mtl with a bad translation. and the plot itself completely copies the original. no creativity. protagonist licking dog tang san. I do not advise anyone.
Uh, you could just give the spear of the golden dragon and not upset the balance. And all the hype that was caused by the spear was also unnecessary. It's too "Chinese" and pretentious
since he became a sycophant of the master and the entire Shrek group, you can not continue to read further
this shit shouldn't exist. I have never seen such a terrible piece of art. The book is laced with racism. The main character is an idiot and useless. Sloppy book. I do not recommend to anyone. If my comment is deleted, I will write a complaint to the administration.
thanks for the chapter. But I still wish there was less water. after all, for the entire chapter, only the path from the camp to the palace became known, which is not informative at all. author more plot and less fillers please.
I hope he doesn't get a spear. In the original, he gets a spear that came from outside of this universe, which greatly destroys the balance, because of this, 99% becomes boring to read. Therefore, it would be good if what he receives at the entrance will either be at the top of Dd or will develop over time. And in general, bringing too strong techniques, bones and abilities from higher worlds, in my opinion, is the work of lazy authors who cannot reveal the original 100%. There are enough abilities and details in the Dd universe to make FF interesting. I hope the author reads my comment. English is not my native language
can you write even one fanfic without incest and milf? Well, at least once. English is not my native language ..................................................................................................
This FF is just incredible. I liked it very much. The main character is not a stupid Chinese idiot who pretends to be forced, but rather thinks with his head. Pretty original storyline. I really hope that the author does not abandon the FF. Continue in the same spirit. English is not my native language.
actually I really liked it. It's quite an interesting piece and the plot is quite interesting. Although it needs serious editing (especially pronouns). Pretty original. At first I expected that it would be something like re: monster or tensura where the main character eats and becomes stronger, but it turned out to be much better. English is not my native language
the first chapter was created simply to increase the number of words. And good reviews and reviews are fake. in fact, this work is very poorly done. the main character is pathetic and boring. I do not recommend reading.
it's too painful for me. Why didn't all stats go up to 1499? This makes me and all the perfectists too angry, I guess. What is the author for? It was possible to wait another day or immediately write the maximum characteristics.
another mtl garbage. I do not recommend to anyone. Dialogues are boring and pointless. where the administration of webnovel looks once it allows such works to readers.
actually I'm disappointed. When I started reading this novel, I really liked it, but then everything went downhill. I think I should have quit back then when in the second chapter they started using Uchiha instead of Faust (an annoying topic). The second wake-up call was that, relying on a piece of "memory", the main character began to spam chakra techniques (in the danmachi world this is mana), but my patience snapped when the system was added. WHAT THE HECK? Generally off topic. The main character is a psychopath. Anyone who disagrees with him is bad. Disgusting work. (English is not my native language)
Let's start with the fact that this novel has almost no bad reviews, no matter how incredible the work is, there will always be someone who will write criticism. (but I didn't find it no matter how much I searched) So I think bad comments and ratings are removed. (or part) I think the novel is a little overrated, I've already read 300+ chapters and I can say that the story is incredibly slow. The protagonist is a hypocritical psychopath and a small child intellectually. Despite past lives, he laments that he was lied to only once, although he lies to everyone all the time. Too long story and fast paced. the secondary villains are all formulaic and stupid. I also did not see the influence of martial arts, which were written about at the beginning to completely forget. To describe my experience of reading this novel, I would describe: –Oh no I'm so mentally broken I need support. –I will help you (family/friends/solus). *mс pushes away help*. –I'm so unhappy. Too much water and drama. (I almost choked) English is not my native language