Dear author, if you read the comments: here are some ideas. 1 way of nine limits. 9 is the number of the limit - for example, nine elements. fire, water, earth, metal, wood, wind, lightning, light, darkness (yin, yang). Or the path of the nine laws - space, time, creation, destruction, yin yang, energy (including elements) life, death, fate (luck). Visualization can also be used as a technique. For example, creating an image of heaven and earth inside the dantian and improving the current technique. Create the image of a divine dragon from your blood and qi. Or visualize Tai Chi in your mind to improve your mental energy. Since he has a panel, he can create a technique even if he does not know it, simply by creating an intention and slowly tracking the creation process. Including complex techniques. you can even create 3 cores like in the douluo world: for mental energy (mind) for blood and qi (body) from 9 elements and world energy (energy and cultivation base)

Wow, that was really cool. I have read all the currently available chapters and I can say that this is a really good work. The good one is a smart protagonist. No cliches. The logic of what is happening. Sustainable development of strength and personality. I hope the author will release chapters more often and the story will not stop. And I really hope it doesn't turn into a harem of Pokemon. Otherwise I really like it 9.5/10 (English is not my native language)

I read almost all books from third-party sites or through a browser. And 0.2 hours is in the application

The quality of the novel in the first ten chapters is very different from everything that follows. From the very beginning, it was interesting to observe the dark setting and struggle, psychology and will to live. And then, after 50+ chapters, the entrance exam for a hundred chapters dragged on for a long time, and the book itself plunged into a children’s adventure. The book has lost its shine for me. the number of words became very small. The creation system does not stand out in any way. The main character who has trained since childhood is no better than ordinary spoiled children of aristocrats. It's a pity. English is not my native language

another romance with a spineless protagonist who thinks only of his dick. The characters are like Pokemon. There is no plot development. Mc has sperm instead of brains. I do not recommend to anyone. English is not my native language

another stupid teen romance with cum instead of brains. There is no plot, full of cliches, all the characters are made of shit. I do not recommend to anyone

good book for those who like to eat shit........... good book for those who like to eat shit........... good book for those who like to eat shit...........

this is a very good fanfiction. The plot is interesting and the main character is not a beta male. I hope that some Chinese clichés and pretending will not be adapted for an English-speaking audience. It would be nice if the plot moved logically and not too slowly. After all, Chinese writers abuse a lot of unnecessary information. And so everything is fine. Continue in the same spirit. English is not my native language

Everything was fine until chapter 39. There are too many bots in the reviews How do you annoy me you stupid bastard. to create a good foundation you need to use good technique from scratch. Because of some competition to sacrifice the future. What a fool you are. Intelligence at the level of secondary characters. Cannon fodder.

I had hopes for this but they did not come true. too disappointing. Even after 100 chapters, the protagonist has level 1 cultivation. 90% of the text is useless crap. The main character is naive and stupid. You can not talk about racism and Nazism at all. Another garbage at the level CHINA is the best country and the rest of the countries are bad. I do not advise. (English is not my native language)

It takes a lot of hard work to write shit like this. I will ignore grammar and content issues. But the plot is the most banal. Starting from the very beginning, where did the terrorists come from in the forest? Why are all the characters stupid? Why do daughters/grandchildren of powerful people have so little protection. Why are all of them "accidentally" saved by the protagonist. The feeling that they are made of cardboard and they painted faces. No character development. The plot armor and the power of the plot is all this novel has. The main characters are like Pokemon. The actions of the protagonist are arrogant and irrational. For example, in chapter 35, the guards were fired just like that, although they were just doing their job. The whole plot is filled with the words "the main character is right and the rest who disagree with him are villains." This shitty novel even continues to be released to this day and is a cash cow. (English is not my native language) This book for schoolchildren 12-16 years old with sperm toxicity who have just entered puberty.

another rubbish mtl with a bad translation. and the plot itself completely copies the original. no creativity. protagonist licking dog tang san. I do not advise anyone.

Uh, you could just give the spear of the golden dragon and not upset the balance. And all the hype that was caused by the spear was also unnecessary. It's too "Chinese" and pretentious

since he became a sycophant of the master and the entire Shrek group, you can not continue to read further

this shit shouldn't exist. I have never seen such a terrible piece of art. The book is laced with racism. The main character is an idiot and useless. Sloppy book. I do not recommend to anyone. If my comment is deleted, I will write a complaint to the administration.

thanks for the chapter. But I still wish there was less water. after all, for the entire chapter, only the path from the camp to the palace became known, which is not informative at all. author more plot and less fillers please.

I hope he doesn't get a spear. In the original, he gets a spear that came from outside of this universe, which greatly destroys the balance, because of this, 99% becomes boring to read. Therefore, it would be good if what he receives at the entrance will either be at the top of Dd or will develop over time. And in general, bringing too strong techniques, bones and abilities from higher worlds, in my opinion, is the work of lazy authors who cannot reveal the original 100%. There are enough abilities and details in the Dd universe to make FF interesting. I hope the author reads my comment. English is not my native language

can you write even one fanfic without incest and milf? Well, at least once. English is not my native language ..................................................................................................

This FF is just incredible. I liked it very much. The main character is not a stupid Chinese idiot who pretends to be forced, but rather thinks with his head. Pretty original storyline. I really hope that the author does not abandon the FF. Continue in the same spirit. English is not my native language.

actually I really liked it. It's quite an interesting piece and the plot is quite interesting. Although it needs serious editing (especially pronouns). Pretty original. At first I expected that it would be something like re: monster or tensura where the main character eats and becomes stronger, but it turned out to be much better. English is not my native language