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Mickaelle09

Mickaelle09

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An 18 years old Christian writer trying to improve every day, as well as a good books (= smart Mc & plot, fantasy, romance, extra MC, antihero MC, no love triangles, no incest, no harem) seeker.

2022-04-28 JoinedCôte d’Ivoire
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle091d
    Replied to Dissapointed_One

    😂

    Did I kill too many characters off or was it that the ending wasn't good enough?
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    The Transmigrated Author
    Fantasy · zowji
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle091d
    Replied to Dissapointed_One

    You'll stop wanting that when your fav character will be the one to die

    Did I kill too many characters off or was it that the ending wasn't good enough?
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    The Transmigrated Author
    Fantasy · zowji
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle0911d
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    Will the real Jullien Evenus please stand up ?

    "You're right." 
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    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle0911d
    Replied to Iguessitsok

    But I guess the real reason why people consider this ability weak is that in order to induce powerful emotions in someone , one has to feel the said emotions with the same intensity. So as the examiners said, it can really drive the user insane and unstable. I can understand why one might find it weak.

    "....Emotive." 
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    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle0912d
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    I honestly hope he'll be able to act like his true self sooner.

    How would Julien conduct himself if he were to give a speech? 
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    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle0912d
    Commented

    what do you put into that anything ?~

    Ch 7 Black Star [1]
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    Advent of the Three Calamities
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle092mth
    Commented

    The chapter was long but they were many skipabble words and descriptions . However, it´s still a bit intriging; more so , because of that ending.

    Ch 2 Atticus
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    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle092mth
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    Then she really didn't think thoroughly before doing it . because people are watching her, so the news can easily spread and reach Atticus. Besides, if he is a nerd, as she herself said, I don't see what popularity she could have from going out with him. In comparison, I believe being Jackson's girlfriend would be more profitable, popularity-wise.

    Kira chuckled and replied, "You mean that nerd? I'm just using him to gain a little popularity. I didn't even allow him to kiss me. He's probably waiting for me now, thinking I'd come and give him a kiss. I'll just tell him I had to do an assignment or something." Jackson then pulled her close for another kiss.
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    Atticus’s Odyssey: Reincarnated Into A Playground
    Fantasy · RealmWeaver
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle092mth
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    Although the interactions between characters were well written , it couldn´t cover up the chapter´s main flaw which is that it is just an info dump ( i had stop midway i the chapter for this reason)Nothing managed to get me interested enough to continue i'm not a fan of less than fifteen years old Mcs so i'll leave this novel at that.May God help you with your works author.

    Ch 1 Altair
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    Shadow of the Abyss
    Fantasy · Lord_Damocles
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle092mth
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    The chapter started so good but ended up disappointing for me.Good points : -It’s written in a simple way so it's easy to get in the book and to understand what happens.-The Mc seems somewhat relatable and relaxed( i don't like cold Mcs)The bad points :- The author likes descriptions.😩It's not a bad thing per se ( it helps one get immersed easily when it's well done).But the problem here is that the author gets carried away in his descriptions.If you analyse the chapter in depth , you'll realise that it's this lenghty because of unnecesary descriptions and info dumping. - The info dumping is really glaring.The author could have spread the informations througout the chapters but instead he did it here . If only the world presented in this way was interesting enough or so original that it was too hard not to explain it like that ! But unfortunetly , it's just your common solo-leveling- like world.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    Dungeon Diver: Stealing A Monster’s Power
    Fantasy · KaeNovels
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  • Mickaelle09
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    I wonder what he fantasizes about since his world is already a fantasy of its own.

    It's more like I need to drink more water in general. I get so sucked into my fantasy worlds sometimes, I forget the real world is moving on around me. I start muttering to myself.
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    Dungeon Diver: Stealing A Monster’s Power
    Fantasy · KaeNovels
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle093mth
    Commented

    With just this ?

    Adonis maintained his bow, earning a soft smile from Seraph. She found herself getting quite fond of this human.
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    An Extra’s POV
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle093mth
    Replied to eishii

    But the problem is that she then would fall back into being a waste of a cultivator.

    "As seen, Ye Qingtang does have some abilities. She is obviously first for the sword array segment today," said the Herbal Faction Elder thoughtfully with a hint of admiration towards Ye Qingtang in his tone.
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    Rebirth of the Strongest Empress
    Fantasy · North Night
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle093mth
    Commented

    Author hiw about using "[ ]" or "< >" in order to render the letter even more distinguishable from the rest of the text ?

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    Lightning Dragon
    Fantasy · NTNova
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  • Mickaelle09
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    And now my question is : why wouldn’t his father use it on himself ? After all , this could have made him even more powerful. Maybe then he wouldn’t have had to "disappear".

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    Lightning Dragon
    Fantasy · NTNova
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle093mth
    Commented

    "Though they* ...for him"I think you should rewrite this sentence author. How about this : " Asher walked amidst the crowd of of people. They pitied him. Yet, never reached out to help him ."

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    Lightning Dragon
    Fantasy · NTNova
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle093mth
    Replied to cyan_blue

    Although it's not okay to insulte people( no matter the reason) , we don't know why he did it in the first place, nor why everyone refrains from helping him.

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    Lightning Dragon
    Fantasy · NTNova
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  • Mickaelle09
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    How ironic when you remember that she publicly berated Ye Xun for being an adoptive daughter.

    He adopted two daughters and raised them up with similar attentiveness. The only difference was that many people in the city saw him picking Ye Xun up, so he could not raise her with the name of his biological daughter. However, honestly speaking, Ye Ling had always treated the both of them fairly; Whatever Ye Qingtang had, Ye Xun would also have a share of it.
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    Rebirth of the Strongest Empress
    Fantasy · North Night
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle093mth
    Commented

    But if the Mc and Ml have à child , for him to to use the child's body means that the child's own conciousness would be earased.🤔 It doesn’t sound so good...

    The moment the little fellow finished speaking, he turned into a ball of light, and when the light faded, the cute and sweet little fellow disappeared. What remained was a tiny dragon which was covered in blue-black scales, curled up in Ye Qingtang's arms.
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    Rebirth of the Strongest Empress
    Fantasy · North Night
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  • Mickaelle09
    Mickaelle093mth
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    Dear readers, here is another instant that you must shut your brain down to appreciate.

    Before leaving the worship stage, Ye Qingtang told her father Ye Ling that she was going to the Si residence. Ye Ling was in an extremely good mood, so, of course, he would give in to her. Once he gave Ye Qingtang his permission, he went back to the Ye residence in high spirits.
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    Rebirth of the Strongest Empress
    Fantasy · North Night
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