Mickaelle09
An 18 years old Christian writer trying to improve every day, as well as a good books (= smart Mc & plot, fantasy, romance, extra MC, antihero MC, no love triangles, no incest, no harem) seeker.
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You'll stop wanting that when your fav character will be the one to die
Will the real Jullien Evenus please stand up ?
But I guess the real reason why people consider this ability weak is that in order to induce powerful emotions in someone , one has to feel the said emotions with the same intensity. So as the examiners said, it can really drive the user insane and unstable. I can understand why one might find it weak.
I honestly hope he'll be able to act like his true self sooner.
Then she really didn't think thoroughly before doing it . because people are watching her, so the news can easily spread and reach Atticus. Besides, if he is a nerd, as she herself said, I don't see what popularity she could have from going out with him. In comparison, I believe being Jackson's girlfriend would be more profitable, popularity-wise.
Although the interactions between characters were well written , it couldn´t cover up the chapter´s main flaw which is that it is just an info dump ( i had stop midway i the chapter for this reason)Nothing managed to get me interested enough to continue i'm not a fan of less than fifteen years old Mcs so i'll leave this novel at that.May God help you with your works author.
The chapter started so good but ended up disappointing for me.Good points : -It’s written in a simple way so it's easy to get in the book and to understand what happens.-The Mc seems somewhat relatable and relaxed( i don't like cold Mcs)The bad points :- The author likes descriptions.😩It's not a bad thing per se ( it helps one get immersed easily when it's well done).But the problem here is that the author gets carried away in his descriptions.If you analyse the chapter in depth , you'll realise that it's this lenghty because of unnecesary descriptions and info dumping. - The info dumping is really glaring.The author could have spread the informations througout the chapters but instead he did it here . If only the world presented in this way was interesting enough or so original that it was too hard not to explain it like that ! But unfortunetly , it's just your common solo-leveling- like world.
I wonder what he fantasizes about since his world is already a fantasy of its own.
With just this ?
But the problem is that she then would fall back into being a waste of a cultivator.
Author hiw about using "[ ]" or "< >" in order to render the letter even more distinguishable from the rest of the text ?
And now my question is : why wouldn’t his father use it on himself ? After all , this could have made him even more powerful. Maybe then he wouldn’t have had to "disappear".
"Though they* ...for him"I think you should rewrite this sentence author. How about this : " Asher walked amidst the crowd of of people. They pitied him. Yet, never reached out to help him ."
Although it's not okay to insulte people( no matter the reason) , we don't know why he did it in the first place, nor why everyone refrains from helping him.
How ironic when you remember that she publicly berated Ye Xun for being an adoptive daughter.
But if the Mc and Ml have à child , for him to to use the child's body means that the child's own conciousness would be earased.🤔 It doesn’t sound so good...
Dear readers, here is another instant that you must shut your brain down to appreciate.