Carl_Joe
The idea was interesting, reincarnating to the character that defined uselessness in all of anime, even gyarados can become magikarp but sakura even without her presence the story of naruto would've moved the same... but then b.s. comes up and he has a super mom that can threaten the hokage, and becomes so op in a single year, naruto (fighting) and sasuke are literal geniuses but took them a few years before becoming strong enough to annoy other villages
Just looking at the Cover Pic will help you know what kind of FanFic this is. Its not not because its Sakura, but because of how utterly ugly the cover is. That is also the same for this FanFic. It is just Trash that can only satisfy those newbie readers or weebs outthere. MC complains too much about being in Sakura's body and I even wonder if she would commit suicide. Chapters are short, maybe around 400~600 words short. The story is also lackluster. The Op-ish tag is nonsense. The MC is a whiny retard who claims to be a father in his/her past life. I don't know about you but if you want a decent FanFic to read then this isn't for you. Well if you don't bother with the nonsense and are just reading for the fun of it then this might work...... ....maybe?
i liked the idea even that the mc has no cheats. but the mc character is like a 6 year old boy who gets mad if not everything goes her way but he is a 30 year old male who has a familiy and runs a buissness. wtf sakuas mother is just op for no reason. ook one reason that is that mc can get over powered after crying he has no cheats. 1 year of training let mc bet veteran anbu, as 12 year old sakura. why is the academi used ? if there are ninjas who can creat a ionin level ninja in 1 year. sarutobi is shown as a evil person, for no reason. in this story he has done nothing bad but mc actes as if he is the worst person in the village.
First off, I don't like this story very much, so a certain degree of bias can be expected. It's a fanfic about Naruto so W world building is mostly already established. I personally only gave 4 stars for that because small changes that appeared bias themself made it worse for me. Updating Stability is ok, Author took a break because of rl problems but otherwise updated rather frequently in the past, and will I assume return to that (maybe). Story development is...also somewhat ok. The usual getting stronger by training montage and then stuff happens afterwards, like canon getting a bit f*cked doggy style. Thing is the story development feels forced at some points because the characters aren't interacting like "real" people or just make irrational decisions. Which brings me to my biggest problem "Character Design", I gave it 1 star. Because the those arround the mc have developments that make them seem like total psychos, mental and just poor attempts to emulate humans! The main character for example seems perf ctly fine going on a murder spree after killing on person during training, the usual speech about kill or be killed, bla bla, but besides having a real fallout and think about it. They just go "ok" vomit once then goes on previous mention murder spree. Also suddenly able to release and shortly after control serial killer "bloodlust" and fight about 52 people even though she almost died against one. Did I mention she has no training whats so ever. Besides training The basic three academy jutsus and body flicker she trained for a day. Said body flicker that also requieres strong legs just like strong arm and a trained back to be able to behead people. Which she DOES when she just a weaker than average 10 year old!!! Also she says/yells things that would put her on a hit list, in a village full of spys/assassins/super humans?!? And that is just the mc I also have pproblems ith the behaviour of her mother, the 3rd Hokage etc. All in all worth reading, but not my favorite, hope the author gets a b bit better with character development