Review Detail of Daijena in I became Haruno Sakura?

First off, I don't like this story very much, so a certain degree of bias can be expected. It's a fanfic about Naruto so W world building is mostly already established. I personally only gave 4 stars for that because small changes that appeared bias themself made it worse for me. Updating Stability is ok, Author took a break because of rl problems but otherwise updated rather frequently in the past, and will I assume return to that (maybe). Story development is...also somewhat ok. The usual getting stronger by training montage and then stuff happens afterwards, like canon getting a bit f*cked doggy style. Thing is the story development feels forced at some points because the characters aren't interacting like "real" people or just make irrational decisions. Which brings me to my biggest problem "Character Design", I gave it 1 star. Because the those arround the mc have developments that make them seem like total psychos, mental and just poor attempts to emulate humans! The main character for example seems perf ctly fine going on a murder spree after killing on person during training, the usual speech about kill or be killed, bla bla, but besides having a real fallout and think about it. They just go "ok" vomit once then goes on previous mention murder spree. Also suddenly able to release and shortly after control serial killer "bloodlust" and fight about 52 people even though she almost died against one. Did I mention she has no training whats so ever. Besides training The basic three academy jutsus and body flicker she trained for a day. Said body flicker that also requieres strong legs just like strong arm and a trained back to be able to behead people. Which she DOES when she just a weaker than average 10 year old!!! Also she says/yells things that would put her on a hit list, in a village full of spys/assassins/super humans?!? And that is just the mc I also have pproblems ith the behaviour of her mother, the 3rd Hokage etc. All in all worth reading, but not my favorite, hope the author gets a b bit better with character development