Review Detail of AndellOfficial in I became Haruno Sakura?

This is a ninja village and without memories you will be noticed immediately. Even the MC's walking should tip off Sakura's mother to a male walk and she would assume that someone transformed and bring her down immediately. I would normally say good luck when I'm dropping a story but honestly I don't think this book should continue. Looking this over none of it works. Screaming in a village filled with people with super senses and saying your character is calm while they are flipping out makes no sense. Look it back over and try again because continuing from this point the only way to fix it is act like there's so problem that the MC quickly fixes when it shouldn't have happened in the first place if you followed your own character's design. I've been reading a lot of the reviews and the only one I saw Author reply was an insult review instead of the ones who actually deal with the story. The excuse for everything bad is either Sakura hate or calling it an art. I'll be honest here, there is such a thing as bad art. that is what this story is. It's okay, even the best authors can make bad books, I don't expect much ******* writers however you have a patr.oen which means you have an higher level of criticism to withstand to receive that money.