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I am Rimuru Tempest(Old Version. Rewrite is out.)

Author: BonAurevoir
Anime & Comics
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What is I am Rimuru Tempest(Old Version. Rewrite is out.)

Read I am Rimuru Tempest(Old Version. Rewrite is out.) fanfiction written by the author BonAurevoir on WebNovel, This serial novel genre is Anime & Comics fanfic stories, covering action, romance, adventure, reincarnation, r18. โœ“ Newest updated โœ“ All rights reserved

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The first few chapters are a bit rough since I wasn't sure what I wanted the story to be like. And the story is a bit rushed until chapter 20-25ish since I wanted to get to the point after the kids get their spirits. After that, the story breaks from canon and slows down the pacing. Hopefully, you will give the story a chance. The joke at the beginning with sage is not indicative of how the story will progress, I just thought it would be funny at the time. ... You already know how it is. Someone gets reincarnated as Rimuru and decides that he wants to have a new life with a kingdom, a harem, and strong skills. I am a first-time writer so if you have any tips let me know. It's obvious but I don't own tensura nor its characters and the picture for the fanfic is not my art. If you are the artist of it let me know and I'll change it or add your name I just found the pic on google and wasn't sure who the artist was. I'll try to update regularly but I do have a full-time job so I probably can't do it daily.

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Aitneony ยท Fantasy
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The poor people

I walked into my classroom after I had come in from lunch. I sat down on the floor where everyone else was sitting. I sat next to my best friend Jessica. My teacher looked me in the eye in the way that he wanted to speak to me or ask me a question. And then he said โ€œChloe, did you watch the news last nightโ€ I answered โ€œYes a bit of it, why?โ€ My teacher replied โ€œDid you see the report about the poor people?โ€ โ€œNoโ€ I said to him, confused. โ€œOk, then I will play itโ€ My teacher turned on our class T.V. The news reporter said โ€œHave you ever thought to yourself what the people in the poor countries are doing right now? I can tell you. They are dying from hunger every 5 seconds! A lot of families are trying to help. But if YOU help them it will make a very big difference. Even if you send a few dollars every week.โ€ โ€œWell, there was a family that wasn`t very wealthy at all! They only had a little bit of shelter and only a little bit of food and water. Every day the Daughter would go and fetch some water from the lake. The eldest son went with his Dad to learn how to kill animals with a bow and arrow or a spear. The Mum collected twigs and bamboo with her 3 year old child and took them to her home where she made them into blankets to sleep with, and mats to sit on. She also made some extra ones to sell. They didn`t have very much, but all that changed when a very kind family helped them. They supplied them with better shelter, food and water, warm and cosy blankets, some mattresses and some furniture. The family was so grateful for what they had done! For the rest of their lives they had enough food and water, all because of one family!โ€ โ€œAfter today a lot of people have died. But if you can maybe resist having a coffee at the coffee shop and spend the money helping people, maybe just maybe you might change a familyโ€™s life! Or even the world!โ€ After the news reporter finished talking it was only then I realised how poor those people really are. My teacher turned the T.V off and by then the school bell rang and the class was dismissed. When Mum picked me up from school I asked โ€œMum, can we go straight home instead of going to the cafรฉ and the money that we would have spent at the cafรฉ can we send the money to the poor people?โ€ โ€œYes, of course we can, I am so pleased that you are thinking of others, rather than yourself!โ€ answered my Mum. After that day I have only been going to the cafรฉ once a month and that makes me feel very happy!

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BonAurevoir
BonAurevoirAuthorBonAurevoir

Obligatory author review. I gotta say that this is my first time writing any actual story(even if it is a fanfic) so in my opinion, I am not that great at writing yet. However, I am trying my best. I know the dialogue and descriptions may seem a bit weird but I am learning as I go. I do try to make as much research as I can(Having the wiki, the manga, and the light novel open at the same time) to write something without creating plotholes. I am going to change the story up but it will follow a similar track until after he gives the spirits to the kids since many important things have to happen for what I want to write in the future to happen. It's hard not to fall into the trap of following exactly what the Original did since it did such a good job at it but I am trying my best. For updates, I try to update as regularly as I can but there may be some times I won't be able to since I do have a full-time job and I may be too tired or busy to write some days. For story development, I have most of the changes planned out after he gives the kids their spirits. I personally think it is pretty good but it is obviously biased as it is my story. Time will tell how that goes as chapter 12 is the most recent chapter as of writing this. For character design. I am trying to write Rimuru as a creative person. Often using spells combinations to create the most effective attack method. He is a bit of a good guy with a "Sense of justice" but when the time comes to be ruthless he is more than willing to do it. Just because he is good doesn't mean he will be obsessed with being a good guy and being a hero though. As for world background, it is Tensura's world so I cannot take credit for it. I think it is a pretty good world with a good story and that is why I decided to write a fanfic in it. Hopefully you enjoy reading the story.

Vail_
Vail_Lv2Vail_

BEEP BEEP. TRUCK-SAMA AT YOUR SERVICEEEE. BEEEP BEEEEP. LOOK OUT THERE'S A GIRL ON THE ROAD I WONDER WHO WILL SAVE HER. YOU. THE ONE WHO IS READING THIS. SAVE HER NOW! BEEP BEEP.

SCP_0999
SCP_0999Lv4SCP_0999

Truck-chan at your service! ..............................................................................................................................

N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

Writing Quality 1/5 Stability of Updates : 5/5 Story Development : 2/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background :2/5 The story had a great start, a great main idea and it seemed good on the first chapter..... However, the constant usage of weird sentences that are used in cultivation killed the entire immersion feeling and destroyed the isekai mood . I didn't came to read those weird and disgusting lines .... People in cultivation worlds seem to be born with tumors in stead of brains , talking in third character or refering himself in a different perspectives makes the reading vomitive...

dozkiller07
dozkiller07Lv4dozkiller07

my only request for this fic is make him looks like a man not a loli and make him more human not the monk I see in the real anime. I never watched this anime because I lose interest the moment I see his preference for his own body. I knew from that moment that this anime is not for me.

Secret_stepy
Secret_stepyLv1Secret_stepy

A fan-fiction of slime anime. 5 stars for writer dedication in providing the stable updates, 3 stars for not enough divergence from the canon (anime) timeline - the protagonist achieves the mostly same things and meets the same people as the canon's Rimuru. The biggest difference (from canon) is that he gets to have some fun *wink,wink* with waifus, different skills doesn't seem to play much of the role if everything else works the same. If there was a bigger divergence from canon, I would give this story 5 stars.

ThisNovelSucksBro
ThisNovelSucksBroLv3ThisNovelSucksBro

Writing Quality = 4/5 Stability of Updates 2/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 2/5 World Background 2/5 Loved it when I first read 80-90 chapters, came back to it after more released and it just became boring. I couldn't find myself enjoying anything and it felt like the MC was the side character not to mention uninteresting.

Pepega123
Pepega123Lv4Pepega123

Overall it's an amazing story and one of my favourite fanfics that I have ever read! Now I gave it 5/5 in all but character design (Which I gave 4/5) because the earlier chapters have pretty bland character design when it comes to the OC characters(Don't mean it in any negative way Bonvoyage) , However the character design of both OC character but also added stuff to canon character have been really great in the later chapters! If you are reading this and haven't read the story yet or you are in the earlier chapters then please give this story a chance! after the first 5-10 chapters the character design becomes way better! Lastly, Thank you Bonvoyage for making and publishing such a amazing story :) I always look forward to the next chapter!

BrownOptometrist
BrownOptometristLv11BrownOptometrist

Fab this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘

RHLABIB
RHLABIBLv4RHLABIB

One of the best fanfic i have read.. ......................................................................... ................. .........................,........

FIGHTING_GAMER
FIGHTING_GAMERLv4FIGHTING_GAMER

It's good. And this is the first time reading novel first I was a anime fan but I got bored second was the manga fan although I hate waiting I started to read novel which was 'I am rimuru' keep up with the good work man/mam

Rakeidoo
RakeidooLv14Rakeidoo

Simply one of the best, well-thought-out Tensura fanfic. In the beginning, I was put off by the striking similarities behind the fanfic and the source material but trust me, once you get past 20ish chapters the MC will start making his moves. The MC possesses the same love for his people as Rimuru, but without the naivety he had pre-Demon Lord Arc. As a reincarnator equipped with the knowledge of the future, MC acts strategically and cautiously to maximize his advantage before the inevitable war. The MC is also wise enough to understand that although Rimuru possessed two very powerful abilities, there are other skills that can be even more potent, so heโ€™s never idle and content with his current achievements and continues to pursue strength for his personal benefit and for his own people. Overall, itโ€™s extremely easy to read, enjoyable, and fulfills the desire that I as a fellow WN reader / Anime watcher tend to have from the โ€˜holesโ€™ that the canon Rimuru sometimes leaves behind. If you like Tensei Slime, you should definitely try it.

GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14GAMING_IS_MUST

I actually haven't read it, but there ain't many 'how I reincarnated as a slime' fanfics out there so I gave 5 stars to motivate the author so he doesn't drop it

Synchroreach
SynchroreachLv4Synchroreach

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Filah08
Filah08Lv2Filah08

Ganbare Writer-Kun ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

Kamishiro_Andres
Kamishiro_AndresLv3Kamishiro_Andres

Sin comentarios, unos de los pocos fanfics de tensura que me gustan mucho, 5โ˜† es mi opinion y nadie lo cambiara, espero y nunca la dejes. La actualizacion es buena y todo, recomiendo este fic a mis amigos para que conozcan de su grandesa.

Unknown02
Unknown02Lv14Unknown02

I am here for one reason...............................................................................................................................to read.

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BaaSheep123
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Probably the best (I've read so far) fanfic of Tensura. Truthfully, this review was done for the Halloween event 2021. Keep up the good work author.

DragonBallDaoist
DragonBallDaoistLv4DragonBallDaoist

Best Tensura fanfic I've ever read and is definitely among my top 10 favourite fanfic of all time. To fill in the letter count thing.. Gay

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