Shoomoon
Shameless author I am giving a 5/5. Thank you to anyone who gives this a shot, I know the start it very rough but don't take my book as a very thought provoking one and just read for fun. But if you do enjoy please leave a review yourself and leave a comment as any constructive feedback is welcome. Anyway I hope I could make you smile with my book.
I am kind of late for a review I guess. But it also means I have a better grasp of the book? Well whatever. REALLY REALLY GOOD STORY! Everything is just... wonderful. I am glad I stumbled on this story as it has brought me lots of hours of enjoyment. The whole setting is really good and the characters very well thought of. The quality of writing is top and the grammar is very decent. There are some minor mistakes but those are just typos. And now I am kind of running out of words, which is sad because there should be more to describe such a great story that hooked me from the very beginning. (The title. Fox Girls are the best!)
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I just like as it is non harem, I'm just tired of these harem books, sometimes it doesn't even make sense but people just like it because of the *** scenes ππ₯± I give this author a thumbs up because not only did she allow novel writing keep its sanity, but she she also wrote such a great novel, so bravo to this author, truly bravo πππππ
It's your standard system story that should NOT be taken too seriously. It definitely aims to be fluffy and cute with its highly intense action scenes. I always find myself wanting to read a slice of life version of the story as I just love the characters and their interactions with each other. I do hope we get an epilogue of the MC living their life out as I could read on forever about them.
The writing is still stiff, but significantly better after editing. The one problem I had with this story on scribblehub was just how hard it was to read. The story itself wasn't exactly professional writing, but engaging and better than a lot of what is out there. The world building is handled well and most of the time rolled into the story telling rather than wild info dumps. I'm glad I can actually read this now without getting a fatigue headache from constantly having to mentally edit the story.