This translation fic is too chinese. I can't.

I don't understand of gender bender things, it is not like the original series having less female character either. I understand if you gender bender in Non Non Biyori because the series lack of male characters. But for that in a shounen anime?! or it is just author's fetish or something?!

either it was mistranslation or the original author didn't know what fuinjutsu is... fuinjutsu is sealing justu. not unique ninjutsu. If you want unique ninjutsu, there are family trait like Ino-Shika-Cho abilities.

So far, this story is not my liking either. But I think a hentai fanfiction with sex system will suit you better just like your name.

If you like Fubuki and Kurokami. This is their variant story. #Konkitsune 🤟

This is a good fanfic. but the slow pace is killing me. I am afraid, you will stuck in the middle someday. You will be less enthusiastic while the progress still low.

It was interesting so far. I really like the cunning Hinata style. I don't mind OP character, but please put the balance with her enemies too. I feel like, if the kid Hinata already this cunning and powerful, the original enemies like Akatsuki or Orochimaru in the series is just a child play to teen Hinata, now she is already invest her long plans with Kimimaru, Neji, Haku and Naruto. I feel like it is not fair for the enemies. lol..It is just my suggestion. I am fine with you continue doing with your own plot or follow a bit of canon plot. Just don't do it too easy (just like a mainstream OP character story). Good luck.