LaughingSalt
Incredibly well written story, was absolutely in love for the first 10 or so chapters But then ( sorry author, I mean this as constructive criticism) the mc’s personality just ruined it. At this stage in the story I know there’s probably some character development but I actually find myself hating him. He went on and on about how he wanted revenge and now he’s just standing around doing nothing. I really hope the best for your story but I’m gonna have to drop it for a while.
I loved the story development and character development. You leveled up in writing your story but since people didn't even read further, you suffered.... New intro to world development.. but just be little clear in your writing.. Since You had vowed to never drop it, and this is cool multiverse novel with a system.... I will also visit it regularly ✌️
Binged this novel over several days (ch 77). Honestly, it was rough in the beginning. But the world building is in-depth and detailed enough without being overbearing, and the story has a light-hearted aspect to most character interactions allow for the heavier moments to hit harder. It kept my interest while the author ironed out some of the rough edges. Definitely would suggest picking this novel up. The MC doesn't spend long before being OP within his realm, and can have shades of Goku's fighting-maniac personality (I can finally go all out! *takes off self-imposed limitations*). There are S-level threats in the universe, but MC hasn't encountered them yet. Looking forward to Vol 2 and what will happen. A lot of room for this novel to grow and a lot of potential story elements I am looking forward to reading. Bonus: Author says they will not go premium. So 100% never dropping this novel.
I like the idea of traveling worlds and maybe even the multiverse and him becoming a deity or something similar the only issue I have is the summon contract like you said maybe if you explained the ramifications especially since he was pretty much murdered. more for it or make it more like a party system instead it would be better than signing a contract with someone you barely know especially when everything is new to him it seems like a risk 90 percent people wouldnt take without being influenced by external forces but even with that it was still a good read considering she doesnt abuse his trust. I also would like to see a little bit of fanfiction in this novel maybe he goes to worlds that he previously thought were fiction I would also like a more indept explanation of magic and his powers he seems to do a lot of things instantly when other people struggle maybe explain his strengths a bit more along with a more in dept power system. These are just my opinions though but everything about this novel is very well written so Ill give 5 stars along with a blessing that you continue the novel or rewrite it.
While I hesitated early one, I have come to appreciate this. I suggest to keep at it man, you have a good story here with a lot of fun with tropes and some parody. Its honestly fantastic. The writting is spot on, and you keep the characters growing and maturing. I greatly appreciate this. I hope you continue this work. I can honestly say folks, give this story a chance and read all the current chapters. Trust me, I am for the most part super picky, read this story.
Warning: Let go of all logic when you read this book! This book’s mc is so overpowered you already know he’s gonna win. This is only for those who enjoy seeing overpowered characters who become even stronger as the story progresses. It is really satisfying for me to see such an absurd power growth. Writing Quality: I did not see any grammatical errors or mistakes that ruined the reading experience for me, so I would rate it 5 stars. But, there were some dialogues between clones that were pretty confusing. I do not know if that was intentional. Updates: I read this is one sitting so i don’t know how fast and good the releases will be. Story Development: The story is very easy to follow and it makes me expectant for more. Character Development: For the author, fleshing out the characters is done in a simple back story, and that’s it. Most of the character development is with the MC, and that’s perfectly okay. I like MC-centered novels. I think the sacrifice of significant fleshing out of characters for the development of the story is worth it. World Background: The setting of this novel leaves a lot of potential, as it is after all on a universal scale. This could go well or it could go poorly. I am excited to see how the MC becomes a universal powerhouse! :)
Brilliant! Ever read Low Dimensional Game? This novel gives the same vibe. Virtuous cycle of empire building and power growth. Some love stories. POV of side characters. Recipe for the good novel. There was a bug in author-sama thinking at around 16 chapter. Don't worry, keep reading. Don't let confusion sway you away from this gem.