Incredibly well written story, was absolutely in love for the first 10 or so chapters But then ( sorry author, I mean this as constructive criticism) the mc’s personality just ruined it. At this stage in the story I know there’s probably some character development but I actually find myself hating him. He went on and on about how he wanted revenge and now he’s just standing around doing nothing. I really hope the best for your story but I’m gonna have to drop it for a while.
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