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Review Detail of Doomey in I'm Invincible Now?

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I like the idea of traveling worlds and maybe even the multiverse and him becoming a deity or something similar the only issue I have is the summon contract like you said maybe if you explained the ramifications especially since he was pretty much murdered. more for it or make it more like a party system instead it would be better than signing a contract with someone you barely know especially when everything is new to him it seems like a risk 90 percent people wouldnt take without being influenced by external forces but even with that it was still a good read considering she doesnt abuse his trust. I also would like to see a little bit of fanfiction in this novel maybe he goes to worlds that he previously thought were fiction I would also like a more indept explanation of magic and his powers he seems to do a lot of things instantly when other people struggle maybe explain his strengths a bit more along with a more in dept power system. These are just my opinions though but everything about this novel is very well written so Ill give 5 stars along with a blessing that you continue the novel or rewrite it.

I'm Invincible Now?

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