Anit666
The story is just awesome! The start is very interesting. The author prepares all the background perfectly for the plot twist about the MC at the end of the first chapter. The MC is a very funny and intelligent character. It's interesting to see how he deals with the world around him, particularly because of his "condition". The narrative is very well written. I couldn't really grasp any major grammatical errors. Overall, the story plot has great potential, the MC's personality is awesome, and the comedy really got me. I can't wait for the next chapters.
First off the plot is very unique and very enjoyable. The writing is very entertaining, and there are hardly any Grammer errors. The Author put good effort into creating this masterpiece. The character gives transmigration a whole new concept, and the dialogue is very interesting. It's clearly comical, and the friendship between Azell and Samur is created perfectly. Goidjob on your novel, I hope for more chapters soonest from you!
Currently at ch 14. Although I don't give reviews so soon for any novel, I read at least 50-60 chaps, but here I am compelled to write - Author knows how to write good dialogues. In this much story, there are too many internal monologues of mc, which are there mostly for comedic purposes. And so many unneeded dialogues make me skip them and dislike the story. But author knows how to write dialogues. The story is also good good till now.
I love it I just need to unlock the chapters every day [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Reading the comments after making a 4 star review it seems the author removed the narrator/reader at chapter 73. I am now giving it 5 stars. The concept of narrator is interesting though as an mc travelling alone in a story always needs another character to make the story interesting and someone who talks in his head might be helpful. Of course I am not sure how well received it migt actually be to readers.