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Daoist_Little_Yun

Daoist_Little_Yun

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"Living is not about avoiding death. It's about making the most out of your only chance." —Daoist_Little_Yun

2019-05-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun11h
    Replied to Youngmaster_Joselo

    Thanks for the support. I appreciate it

    Ch 829 Lawrend Wakes Up Inside Of Aleshia • • • • •
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    Combat Maid Harem
    Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun3mth
    Posted

    The writing quality is quite engaging in some parts, but the author's lack of experience clearly shows in a lot of ways. The scene changes suddenly, and I feel like it lacks some depth to it. The MC was suddenly in another world after just a single paragraph. It happens fast, so it was quite disorienting for me. Not to mention the other things. The start of the chapter is not interesting at all. It was mostly boring until the demon showed up. The way the MC died is quite cliche, and it wasn't as comedic as the author definitely hoped to be. The cover is lackluster and can definitely use some help from an artist who knows how to letter a title. The synopsis is disorderly and hard to read. The author needs to format it, but not just that. I think the contents of the synopsis aren't interesting at all. This might sound nitpicky but I don't like how he put 'Chapter n' before every chapter name because the app already does that. It only makes the chapter titles look awful, in my opinion.

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    Spellcrafter's Demise
    Fantasy · OakFlame
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun3mth
    Posted

    Interested? This novel will tackle the problem of male and female equality in the present world but done in a Fantasy world. What is right? What is wrong? Hopefully, I will be able to give each side their best take. I have been preparing this novel for about 10 months. This has been rewritten multiple times and the plot has changed a lot. I'm very confident that you will like this novel of mine! Please go read it, and tell me what you think in the comments.

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    Release That Maid
    Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun4mth
    Replied to Soorya_Koneko

    Hate it when the supervisors arrives and micromanages

    The male cultivator expressionlessly said to Old Man Wang, "From today onwards, the two of us will be responsible for protecting Elder Iron's medicinal herb garden. You don't need to be bothered by us. Also, don't disturb our cultivation."
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    Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate for a Thousand Years
    Eastern Fantasy · Let me laugh
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun5mth
    Replied to Daoist_Little_Yun
    Ch 777 Juju Undresses • • •
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    Combat Maid Harem
    Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun5mth
    Commented

    Juju

    Ch 777 Juju Undresses • • •
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    Combat Maid Harem
    Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun5mth
    Commented

    Was a good read. Too bad I was busy dissecting the sentences. Hehehe

    Ch 65 [Bonus chapter] Chapter 65: Little Goblin, Mel'Zeth! [R18]
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    Summoner: Monster Girl Harem!
    Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Commented

    RIP Valentina

    Ch 740 Valentina
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    Combat Maid Harem
    Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Posted

    5/5 Didn't even read it Didn't even read it Didn't even read it Didn't even read it Didn't even read it Didn't even read it Didn't even read it Didn't even read it

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    Harem In Academy: How To Not Get Depressed During High School
    Fantasy · BlackFlamer
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Posted

    The 'Money' in the title attracted my attention instantly. As someone who has read funny 'money' cultivation novels, I'm excited about what this one would bring. I'm gonna try it out! Good luck to me!

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    Sovereign Of Money Dao : IWS
    Eastern Fantasy · TuXueXiaoCanYong
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Posted

    At first, I thought this novel would be another boring redo novel, but the more I read it, the better it seemed to me. I suggest you don't judge a book by its cover on this one. I'm sure you won't regret it. Trying to read it won't kill you anyway

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    MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
    Video Games · TrueDawn
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Posted

    Heavenly excrement! The cover is so nice! Just from looking at it, I can tell that this book will be great. Dear author, please write that scene in the future! I'll pay big bucks for it!

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    Bloodmancer: Hero of Ruin
    Fantasy · MotivatedSloth
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Commented

    There is an impostor among us

    He was very pleased about it. It was a form of supernatural power told in myths and legends after all. All guys harbored absurd dreams when they were young, such as becoming a powerful sorcerer, or a mech warrior, or a magical girl, all capable of casting magic like Harry Potter.
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    Nurturing Humanity
    Magical Realism · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Commented

    There are also other methods to put a 'gene' inside of someone. If you know what I mean ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

    He continued cycling leisurely on the countryside path, while shaking his head and feeling speechless. "So I'd be singing a song about me getting cheated on then, would I? Sh**, I'm never gonna put such a gene inside me."
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    Nurturing Humanity
    Magical Realism · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 The Shadow Atop The Windowsill
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    Combat Maid Harem
    Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Replied to SoloQueen

    Which forehead?

    Chen Xi kissed Xu Zhi hard on the face out of excitement, before skipping off in embarrassment.
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    Nurturing Humanity
    Magical Realism · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Commented

    Fr fr

    "For real?"
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    Nurturing Humanity
    Magical Realism · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Commented

    I lament the fact that they were never able to enjoy the full human experience

    The two legendary witches who had opened up a new era stopped before the temple. They were about to meet their end soon, and their eyes were filled with tears.
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    Nurturing Humanity
    Magical Realism · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Replied to Officially_Undead

    I approve of Circe's methods

    It could even become a useful tentacle for Circe, the witch in charge of chaos and curses, for self-consolation when she had to satisfy her lustful desires. It was multi-functional and extremely useful.
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    Nurturing Humanity
    Magical Realism · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile
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  • Daoist_Little_Yun
    Daoist_Little_Yun6mth
    Replied to themerkpanda

    emtirely

    The following year, Circe had an epiphany about evil sorcery and created the cursed voodoo doll.
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    Nurturing Humanity
    Magical Realism · Three Hundred Pounds of Smile
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