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Sigh... Good at start but become rubbish after a while.. the author love to dragging his story and plot by keep letting his enemies runaway just like watching Ash vs Team Rocket from pokemon..

Mc is op just it be op and he always lets his enemies escape even though he is op and with a harem tag I’ve read past chapter 100 and he still doesn’t have a single girl and this is my personal peeve but I despise when someone constantly gets the male and female pronouns backwards

Thanks for the chapter and thanks for using the noble Fantasms in the GOB. Most other authors just say they shooting stuff from it but don’t realise how powerful those nb acc are in the treasury. It would great to see a Gilgamesh mc that has mastered everything in his treasury

unfortunately the mc was stupid enough to eat a devil fruit outside of one piece so now every kid can defeat and kill with a water gun full of sea water was just really stupid

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So we have the mc who is reincarnated into dxd world into a Gilgamesh descendent that is basicly him.So our mc is making a name for himself and trying to suppres the world like his ancestor.

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The writing really needs to be edited. It’s very confusing. Also the story doesn’t make sense some of the time. Good premise needs to be edited.

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The writing is bad in multiple ways. Worst of it is that there are constant info dumps with lengthy power and item descriptions taking up entire chapters at times. When it isn't boring me with info dumps the actual writing itself is rather boring even the fights which are drawn out like the worst DBZ fights. Finally it is also just bad in that there are often mistakes, missing or nonsensical sentences and it is just bad like a very bad translation. I can't say too much as I'm at chapter 27 and due to all the info dumps and drawn out worthless fights there has barely been any story progress. What little is there isn't good, but who knows maybe it become good at chapter 100+, but I'm not sticking around until then to find out. Characters, well so far the only character not a cardboard cutout is MC and MC isn't good. His character makes no sense given what little we know about him. He is reincarnated in for 6 years without memories then gets back his memories from his past life(though we have no clue what he was like in that life) then he has to live through Gilgamesh' entire lifetime of memories including Gilgamesh' feelings at the time yet comes out of it completely without combat experience or any other effect from experiencing all these memories that are probably even more numerous than those of his previous life. The world so far is fine, it's DxD. Can't really take credit for someone else's work. Author's additions to this work so far have not been for the better.

Fue decayendo todo, es el más fuerte ahora y espera a que sus enemigos ataquen, y tarda capitulos en matarlos cuando puede en solo segundos.

If the name of the story is gonna be Gilgamesh in DxD then actually have it be gilgamesh. I came here expecting Gilgamesh and got something else completely. Total waste of time

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I think you should develop MC relationships with female or male main characters instead of fighting scenes if doing so would make the story pacing better than fighting that doesn't make any sense at all (personal opinion)

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this is a good ff don't get me wrong but a thing that keeps happening is the author keeps nef the MC like every fight non stop and than make it like 6 chapter long fight its so annoying.

Classic op mc self-suflfillment story. Nothing special or new here. Writing is fluent at least. Read if you are bored and want to read this kind of thing.

While I would jump at something like this. But I have to say it doesn’ suit my tastes. When you write the fic you decided on the character of Gilgamesh. However you diluted the character badly. You added a system onto it along with other powers. Other powers is fine as long as you keep the core power of the character. As when people see the Mc is gilgamesh they are expecting the Gates of Babylon. However since you have overloaded and diluted his character a lot. While he is gilgamesh the core of the character has become something entirely different and less rounded/dynamic character composition.

A decent novel but not for me Way too much rias and issei bashing The mc is a typical hypocrite who claims that he hates perverts like issei but a few chapters into the story and He's already lusting after most of the female characters The author made him to op but he lacks brains The fights are unnecessarily long