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While I would jump at something like this. But I have to say it doesn’ suit my tastes. When you write the fic you decided on the character of Gilgamesh. However you diluted the character badly. You added a system onto it along with other powers. Other powers is fine as long as you keep the core power of the character. As when people see the Mc is gilgamesh they are expecting the Gates of Babylon. However since you have overloaded and diluted his character a lot. While he is gilgamesh the core of the character has become something entirely different and less rounded/dynamic character composition.