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A 10 old child confined to a hospital room for all most of his life dies when his illness takes him from the world,he loved to read fantasy stories with swords and magic, oh how he especially loves the hero’s he would dream about exploring his own fantasy world. Until he was reincarnated into a new story his own story This is my first attempt at writing a story. so if by some grace of god I get good enough at writing a story I’ll probably try to re write this I don’t know how often I write maybe once a week or two also any suggestions/advice would be appreciated also this will probably suck just letting ya know I don’t own dragon age, only my oc I guess Also this will be an AU as a I have a final enemy worked out already I just don’t know if this is in the direction they’ll take the games or series I also dont own the cover Not a harem If someone else already did this then i dont know i havent read any dragon age fanfic that goes in the direction mines gonna go The free rein over mana power wont make him overpowered instantly or anything like that he won’t even have the willpower to use it all this power does is work like life in vains rudeas im saying his because its the only iteration of that anime or manga I’ve read or watched but basically with his willpower he can use mana to create or control his own creations and others with free will so he’s only limited by his imagination and willpower

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The Construction of Revasan

<9:41 Dragon on the 30th of Nubulis>

{6:00 am}

(Jackson Revas)

As I looked down at the construction plans for the new city I was baffled.

"Walter, how the hell did you come up with creating a new dimension through runes?"

"I didn't Jackson remember Elvhenan?"

"The ancient elven empire they were amazing, the books that I read gave me hundreds of advancements to spell theory alone."

"The eluvians they used those to travel around and make independent dimensions in between the fade and Thedas."

"How do we work around the veil though?"

"We have you,theoretically you can tear the veil and stabilize it and the new dimension behind it."

"We need some security we can't just have guards outside of the gate?"

"Will doesn't speak about it often but, he say's you come from a world with a computer thing that has huge troves of information."

"Walter let me stop you right there I was ten when I died back then, I had no idea how to build a computer."

"But, you do your mana you just have to will it into existence?"

"You want me to make a network through mana?"

"Yes."

"You do know any skilled mage would be able to at least sense that running over them from the fade."

"We just need it in Tevinter."

"You want to keep this to ourselves?"

"Yes until we don't have to you've seen the Qun they would take the technology for themselves and wage war on all of Thedas."

"Hmm ok I'll do it just be ready I'll probably pass out afterwards."

"I'm glad your willing to try."

"Hell it's your one of your ideas Walter I have to try,because you came up with my form of teleportation and that alone has helped us save thousands."

As we walked towards the palace or what's going to become the new city hall, we entered through the double doors and looked at the throne which will be the where I put the gate.

Once I destroyed the throne I started to materialize the gate, I decided to make it a gate made out of marble and customized it with purple accents which where the runes connecting the gate to the fade.

This is the part which will take the most mana out of me creating a sub dimension out of the fade and materializing the materials enough to build Minrathous In the fade with the enough space to build an extra college for the magi. After that I passed out.

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<9:41 Dragon 1st day of Eluviesta>

(Jackson Revas)

"Ugh how long have I been out?"

"Morning sleepy head."

"Morning, uh who are you."

"I'm sorry it's just Mr Walter told me to call you that when you woke up."

"It's fine now leave please."

Once she left, I got out of bed to realize that I had grown again standing around 6'8

"Hah I need to stop growing I'm already six inches taller than my dad."

I opened up my closet to see new clothes next to my old one which can only mean, yup a letter right on the bed stand from dorian hearing that my clothing was god awful.

Once I walked out of the room I was staying in I could see my army helping to build the new city, and looked over to see Walter giving them instructions on what to do as I walked over to him.

"Hey Walter."

"Makers shit Jackson, you keep growing you do know your going to be the height of the qunari soon right."

"Ahh shut up Walter where's dike and will."

"Dike is training the rest of the army while Will is trying his best to help, also did Dorian send you more clothes?

"Yes, I believe his exact words were I looked like an apostate hobo,I don't know when he came up with it but, it worked to get me to where the clothes except there mighty uncomfortable to wear."

"Yes we can all see that in the way you waddled over to here."

As I was about to ask about the waddle, I saw a group of four walking in a very curious group an elven male standing around 5'5, a female knight, a qunari with horns who I can only guess is the Iron bull which means the other lady would be the first enchanter Vivienne.

"You didn't tell me we had guest Walter."

"It's because I didn't even know."

Before the inquisition could even try to ask about what was happening behind me I created an illusion to stop them from seeing what we were doing and signaling Walter that everything was ok.

"What do I owe the pleasure your Mr Lavellan?"

"We've come to ask for help."

"Now before you speak anymore darling I theres a disturbance in the area behind him?"

"I do not believe that is your business miss Vivienne."

"If you want an alliance wouldn't we need to know?"

"I didn't ask for an alliance all I said was I would support you, and I believe relationships are built on trust mister Lavellan?"

"I apologize on behalf of my companion she does that sometimes."

"Scared of demons are we Miss Vivienne?"

"Darling any mage in their right mind should be scared of demons."

"Humor me Miss Vivienne,have you ever walked the fade or ever even tried to be one with the fade it would benefit you greatly."

"Darling I don't need advice from apostate mages."

"Apostate mages huh?"

"I'm very sorry for my companion's blatant disregard of your position if you wish I could have her leave?"

"Oh no it's fine I was just having a little fun please sit."

I said as I materialized a table with six chairs for all of us.

"What the shit."

"The iron bull, pleased to meet you I was actually considering hiring your company your group has a great reputation."

"Can we get to business please,"

"Sorry Walter I was just having my fun. Now whats it exactly the inquisition wants from me."

"Sister Leliana my spymaster say's she knows you?"

"Yes it's true what of it?"

"We were hoping for an alliance, for someone to help close the veil."

"I may have taken over half of Tevinter but, I assure you the rest of the fight we'll take almost all my resources."

"We just want public support theirs masses of escaped Tevinter slaves who are heading to solace by the day's just to join your cause."

"You want me to give the chantry a good word I don't know if you've noticed but, my views don't line up with theirs if you haven't noticed."

"We have but, the public is with you, and they can't completely ignore the public."

"So you want me to endorse you?"

"Yes, that's exactly what we want."

"Sure."

"Did you say sure."

"Yes but, I want something in return."

"What is it name your price?"

"I was wondering when you would talk seeker, but my price is an alliance you'll grow and keep growing with the name of the herald that we'll keep helping you?"

"That's a good bargain."

"Walter I would appreciate it if you would go with them to get the alliance through completely with their ambassador I didn't expect them to come here themselves."

"It will be done."

After that Walter took thirty of elite soldiers and left towards Haven. Once they were out of Reavnas I went to go give Will another mission.

"Will."

"Yes Jackson?"

"Take 400 soldiers and escort my family here."

"That we'll take about two weeks."

"It's fine just make sure their comfy on there way over."

"It we'll be done."

"Dike we'll be moving to take the three cities of,Trevis,Nessum, and caimen breca in 2 weeks."

"Three in one again, why two weeks though?"

"My family we'll be here by then."

"Alright We'll have another two thousand men by then."

"We'll they be decently trained?"

"They'll be able wield a sword and shield."

"Than leave them here to train with will."

"Alright."

Once he left I went to my room and made a mana zone around myself while up'ing the intensity of my usual work out, and choosing to do it in 45x gravity makes it even tougher.

While also consistently emptying my mana reserves by lowering the temperature I work out in to build up resistance to the cold.

Once my parents get here I have to be ready to start moving on Seheron once we're done with securing our half of Tevinter.

There’s probably going to be another chapter later today and if you questions or suggestions feel free to comment on them

Also again Mc x Josephine or Mc x an oc I’m thinking a Qunari woman for him but, I want yall’s opinion on it too.

Actually there will be a chapter later today don’t know what time but, it will be about 2,000 words or more

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