Reviews of 21467360105362705

it,s rare or difficult to have villain and heroin both to have the same side or favor...the first progress of the novel is good, and I hope for more...

the story is great, please return author = ( .............................................................................................................................

Really looking forward in how this develops, gotta tone down those *cough* reactions *cough* tho, if you do more it's gonna get repetitive real quick. The uhh... grammar needs some fixing but it's fine overall.

Amazing work so far I’ve got no complaints Yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yup yes yup yeah I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yup yes yes I yup I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yes yup

Good start of the novel :)....................................................................................................................

Took so long to set up, even taking multiple chapters just to tell that the main character is female. The setting is so messed up as well. Not very interesting to me. And i hate the names used especially luis

I like the characters and how the story includes the point of view of multiple characters. The scene in the classroom had me giggling .I can't wait to read more.

I dont usually do this but this book is one of the best books on this site. the only issue is updates but seeing how addictive this book is even if the author updated every hour it would be less. good work author just dont suddenly disappear on us.

A diamond in the ruff in my opinion a bit sad I ended up finishing it so fast very well done Author-san the effort put into this shines so bright it blinds i can't wait for the next update so you got my patience bro I've fallen in love and I'm not ashamed to say it ~thank you🙃

what the f happened? why no update?

Very nice story. A bit dark in the background of the characters. I do hope you continue to update this story if possible. I would be a really happy person if it does keep on updating.

It is really well written. It might be other circumstances, but the author hasn't written in 20+ days. It's over the top in a good way and it is very goofy. Except, I HATE YOU WHATEVER HIS NAME IS (Luis?).

hmm look forward more chapter btw the synopsis kinda interesting... it's funny to be honest 😂🤣😉 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

good history. **********************************************************************************************************************************************************

It's pretty good for a closeted 15-year-old, such as yourself to write, cousin. You need to fix your grammar a bit, the story has a lot of potential, and I recommend focusing a bit more on world-building. I also made this account just to watch over your progress, and yes I promise not to out you, I know how homophobic your parents can be. I hope you continue improving.