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Nale_Sheeeeeee
Nale_SheeeeeeeLv42yrNale_Sheeeeeee

Really looking forward in how this develops, gotta tone down those *cough* reactions *cough* tho, if you do more it's gonna get repetitive real quick. The uhh... grammar needs some fixing but it's fine overall.

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Nale_Sheeeeeee
Nale_SheeeeeeeLv4Nale_Sheeeeeee

Gonna say the rest as I read.

Krysanthe422
Krysanthe422Lv4Krysanthe422

The only reason why those reactions were so extra was that I needed a reason for the Villainess to interact with the heroine. I promise that future reactions wouldn't be that extreme, but it was kinda funny to write though ngl