Was interested at first but the author prolongs the reveal too damn much. Its one thing to keep shit a secret for whatever bullshit but the fact that its hurting his wife should have been corrected. Mc could have properly revealed at Least to her so she is in on the secret. But no, author prefers the mc keeps indirectly hurting the wife. Stopped reading around 50+

This has been prologed long enough. This is now boring to me. Im out

The author is just proloning at this point. Deliberately hiding from his wife and allowing her to get hurt. This is getting annoying

Perfect embodiment of americans. Shoot first, ask questions later lol

Was hopeful but greatly disappointed. Dr wells seemingly isnt there, the system thing is lame, mc still makes a lot of mistakes as if he does not know logical thinking

Initially interested since it was an interesting take on a smart naruto. But the moment the author went into the temari bullshit, it went downhill pretty fast. Author kept writing about their romance when...newsflash, they are literal KIDS. Any romance should only have been written past shippuden timeline. Not anytime before when they are literal kids. The moment they introduce the temari arranged marriage, it goes on and on about them which was why i dropped it.

I think the author totally missed the mark on this temari romance. They are literal kids. Any romance should only have been written past shippuden timeline at minimum.

Only thing i didnt like so far is the temari love interest

This was actually brilliant. To affect time travel machines just because of a meta human ability. This was a very interesting take. Good job author

Rookie mistake not going after lex asap.

Being a super soldier, doesnt that mean he cant become a boxer anymore? Coz he wont be able to turn off his strength

Samurai are from japan so... whats a chinese samurai?

Disappointed he let that guy live. He could have eliminated him and throw his body inside that random portal anyway

I dont understand why choose illuminati as the antagonist of the story. Wouldnt it be more believable to make the government the enemy? I mean, in the PH the president and the senators are all corrupt with legit criminal records. So why not them, why make a bogus illuminati

I was interested at first but i really hate false accusation plots and the author seems to like putting false accusations to the mc often. Hard pass

A lot of missing details. Why is the mc following someones orders? Where are they? Why firght against angels and demons alike? Then meet them in where ever the fuck they are. So many details skipped over that i have no idea whats going on. Very poorly written i n my opinion

Not gonna lie, the first parts of the story were well written. But the moment the author went full cultivator immortal shit, it became absolutely boring for me. Shinobi are japanese while cultivators and immortals are chinese and korean (murim) so i feel those dont completely belong or blend with the naruto world. Samurais would have been better. I only enjoyed the story up to the point that mc leaves konoha. Beyond that makes me fall asleep with boredom.

Thanks for the super enjoyable fantic!

I loved this chapter

Honestly a little disappointed the peggy cap reunion was glossed over. Would have loved to read about that moment to be honest. But enjoyed the chapter non the less