PancakesWitch
this is my one of my favourite web novel along side epic of vampire dragon. I like the way of this world's magic story development and after reading this last few chapter I think the sealed unique skill god possess the power of primordial deity of eternity and creation because in the description of heaven magic there is written that welders of this magic is the descendent of primordial deity of eternity and creation. I can't wait for the next chapter there is the side of elf Princess and all that. then what will ygdrosil's will do now if there is a new welder of fate and law attributes magic. what will happen with the colors. and if Drake will get the other attributes or not...and a request to the to change the cover picture of this web novel to like you did with epic of vampire dragon. a good one plz your biggest fan of all time love you❤️❤️❤️
me gusta la historia, es interesante. el elfo verde me recuerda a potimas. también espero que no les tome mucho tiempo llegar al continente humano, eso seria agradable de leer y ver. como los cambios que trajeron los otros reencarnados. por cierto...se encontraran con kireira o algo así es el futuro? ya que belendana es un fragmento se su alma... también me gustaría saber si hay ilustraciones de todas las formas de Drake.
Very nice novel. A lot of good humor which is derived from the fact that the mc doesn't take himself seriously which can lead to funny moments. The world building is great as a lot of backstory is given to the different realms and kingdoms. It's also feels rewarding when the MC gets his powerups and acquires new skills. The introduction to new characters feels smooth and they all have great chemistry together. The clear goals and objectives presented in each "arc" are very straightforward thus easy to follow along and it feels motivating to follow the crews journey towards these goals. My main issue comes from the writing sometimes. There are often typos, repeated sentences or grammar issues. There's often times in chapters where there will be two paragraphs which basically get the same point across. The author uses the word "bathed" quite a lot (sometimes too much) in a strange way. E.g. The MC bathed the enemy in attacks. It feels like a awkward use of the verb and you will see this in a lot of chapters. I feel like the writing quality could be improved if the author proofread his chapters. As these simple issues diminish the immersion. TDLR; there's a little bit to be desired in the writing quality side of things, but Great novel and easy to get into!