Ryuuoujin
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Ryuuoujin2dCommentedHimself?
And, as a result, Nero was now bickering with Nero.- Ryuuoujin2dCommented
You forgot a word there
"They're just worried about you," Julian said while patting Neoma's head. "And Winter is right. You can't people just because they're my friends. Let's be careful next time, okay?' - Ryuuoujin2dCommented
*beer
"Hey kid, I'm not dead. But you owe me a bear and a burger, and maybe a few thousand bucks—no, a few hundred thousand; I saved your ass." Suddenly, Dimitri finally spoke, lifting his hat to reveal his sharp eyes. - Ryuuoujin12dCommented
Shouldn’t it be "me included"?
"I came her personally to greet you because you are exceptional new members, and wanted to offer you a scholarship," the wizard said. "Tomas here is still a rather unexperienced magician, he has been my pupil for the last three years, but he is still very rough around the edges. However, I am quite proud he managed to scout such brilliant geniuses such as all of you. If we play our cards right, you all could guarantee yourselves high positions in our Organization in the future, my included." - Ryuuoujin18dReplied to Sarah02
Thought it was Latin.
Lilith's naming ability had yet to improve. - Ryuuoujin18dCommented
*I shall make you fear me
But one particular sadistic loli would not let him do such a cowardly thing yet smart thing. All must be tortured equally, 'I shall you fear me first before I give you the chance to adore my existence!' - Ryuuoujin18dCommented
I think I understand what you to say, but it really strangely formulated.
The Pixies, unlike the Ogre Tribe, was the kind of daemon who does not have with their fertility. So their number was understandable. - Ryuuoujin18dCommented
The last sentence there seems in complete…
She could no longer do anything, she had done everything she could do and anything any further would be meaningless struggles. The Ogres began Healing but not everyone could be saved as those who had their bodies - Ryuuoujin18dCommented
Doing to stop? Wouldn’t, going to stop, be better here?
"What!? Are you doing to stop!? Do you believe her words!? Really!?" - Ryuuoujin23dCommented
*How about we have a big practice
"How about we practice a big inside my Shadow Realm, dear?" I asked her. "I'll bring some Undead so you can use them as practice dummies too. Let's go. We only have a couple of days before we have to start our raid, so let's practice as much as we can." - Ryuuoujin26dCommented
Destroyed? Wouldn’t Destroyer fit better there giving the context
"I can't let you do that." I laughed. "I've got a family to protect and love. And above all, I don't want to become a destroyed, I am a guardian. This is my purpose, Gluttony. Our purposes conflict with one another. And only through this battle we'll decide whose purpose is stronger." - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
"Would" fit better here given the context .
"Oh, I see... So, these are the credits I won from betting with that jealous girl last night~! Hahahaha~! Thank you very much, Instructor Lan~! You are really the best~! I thought she should pretend to forget about it!" Tang Li Xue joyfully stated to Instructor Mei Lan. - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
*a tall —> at all
She was overly excited about something that was most likely not going to affect their village a tall… But hey, I do like the enthusiasm she's putting. - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
Here —> where
"Zephyrus is also advancing steadily; he doesn't want to lose to his sister." Giggled Faylen. "His Unique Soul and his Aura are still a mystery to me… I don't know here all this power comes from, but we have to continue teaching him to control it properly, so it doesn't eventually consume him instead." - Ryuuoujin1mthCommented
Boy? Shouldn’t it be body…
I spun my body into midair, both slashing weapons, unleashing a tremendous, spiraling gray slash that destroyed Blednica's spears imbued with The Bleeding Scream's {Presence} and then clashing into her boy, cutting her down into thousands of tiny pieces! - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
Shouldn’t there be be the word heart after beating? Or did you leav it that way on purpose
Ye Zhen let one of his black ghosts carry Rongrong's body as Ye Zhen himself pasted several black talismans onto Rongrong's beating while reciting some kind of mysterious mantra from his [Death Revelation Sutra]. - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
*her
Then Rongrong took a mouse from his beast storage bag and let the mouse track Tang Li Xue by using Gu Shengxin's blood as the medium. - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
*to
"Shut up…" Furoh sighed. "Oh, I guess my shapeshifting abilities are also very different compare dot Ninhursag, for example…" - Ryuuoujin2mthCommented
Wrong series
"Phew! I really wanted to take one of these… Magic is sure convenient! We can make up a nice hot spring anywhere." Nepheline sighed in relief, my mother-in-law's body was more beautiful than I imagined, she was so well toned! Will Kireina get like this in the future too? I hope so! - Ryuuoujin2mthReplied to Kurai_Takahashi
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