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Has a cool post apocalyptic setting with zones that lead to other worlds which leads to cool new environments for the MC to explore so we aren't stuck in the same setting all the time. The power progression feels good. It's not too fast or too slow and it feel's satisfying whenever MC gains a breakthrough in strength. For me what made the novel stand out was the MC having a romantic interest from the very beginning. Often in Novels the MC doesn't have a romantic interest until halfway through the novel but then they might be absent from the spotlight for a very long time. Although this happens in this novel it's not for too long. These two adventuring together and seeing their chemistry makes me feel quite invested in their relationship and seeing how they both develop as characters and their abilities.
Very nice novel. A lot of good humor which is derived from the fact that the mc doesn't take himself seriously which can lead to funny moments. The world building is great as a lot of backstory is given to the different realms and kingdoms. It's also feels rewarding when the MC gets his powerups and acquires new skills. The introduction to new characters feels smooth and they all have great chemistry together. The clear goals and objectives presented in each "arc" are very straightforward thus easy to follow along and it feels motivating to follow the crews journey towards these goals. My main issue comes from the writing sometimes. There are often typos, repeated sentences or grammar issues. There's often times in chapters where there will be two paragraphs which basically get the same point across. The author uses the word "bathed" quite a lot (sometimes too much) in a strange way. E.g. The MC bathed the enemy in attacks. It feels like a awkward use of the verb and you will see this in a lot of chapters. I feel like the writing quality could be improved if the author proofread his chapters. As these simple issues diminish the immersion. TDLR; there's a little bit to be desired in the writing quality side of things, but Great novel and easy to get into!
1st. and once again huge thanks for this chapter
Quylla deserved better đ˘đ˘đ˘. lowkey hate the kingdom and royals for being useless most of the time.
;( rip