Review Detail of Karnage20 in Epic of Ice Dragon: Reborn As An Ice Dragon With A System

Very nice novel. A lot of good humor which is derived from the fact that the mc doesn't take himself seriously which can lead to funny moments. The world building is great as a lot of backstory is given to the different realms and kingdoms. It's also feels rewarding when the MC gets his powerups and acquires new skills. The introduction to new characters feels smooth and they all have great chemistry together. The clear goals and objectives presented in each "arc" are very straightforward thus easy to follow along and it feels motivating to follow the crews journey towards these goals. My main issue comes from the writing sometimes. There are often typos, repeated sentences or grammar issues. There's often times in chapters where there will be two paragraphs which basically get the same point across. The author uses the word "bathed" quite a lot (sometimes too much) in a strange way. E.g. The MC bathed the enemy in attacks. It feels like a awkward use of the verb and you will see this in a lot of chapters. I feel like the writing quality could be improved if the author proofread his chapters. As these simple issues diminish the immersion. TDLR; there's a little bit to be desired in the writing quality side of things, but Great novel and easy to get into!