PancakesWitch
One of my favorite story. This writing isn't that good in the first chapters but it became much better later. All the characters have something and harem members didn't stop being interesting once they join it. In fact some (like the recent aquarian princess) begin to have a development only after joining the harem. There is no characters forgotten (exept Wagyu maybe) and we can see that the world is big and hide some secrets. Highly recommended.
It's a great novel, although there are some flaws. The MC personality is pretty annoying, but you just need to tone him down a bit. The fight scenes are also pretty lackluster, how to say it, you don't feel the seriousness of it at all. Fight scenes are supposed to be exciting. Excluding that, the rest is great. It's a great idea and the history isn't rushed, the chapters are also of considerable length. Keep up the good work.
I usually hate, I mean hate, I mean really despise novels that make their MC male and then turn them into female. not only do I find that concept idiotic, because why would you ever create a male character and then make it female, just start with the female character!!!! You don't need the male character added on to it. There are many successful novels with a female role but I digress. I'm extremely into this web novel, I find it very entertaining and the pacing is done very well, so five out of five.
Overall I think it's great but the one thing that irks me is that it's kind of hard to notice all the wives since she has so many. Well, I haven't really caught up to the updates but for now, it's just hard for me to even remember their names. I hope that the author does do a better job of assimilating characters. I honestly barely remember half the wives because their almost irrelevant.
This is my first review for a genuinely good book. At the start it was a little cringey and times with a few mistakes but the overall story was so interesting that you could just ignore it. The story seems pretty cliche with the whole reincarnation business but as you get into later chapters you would realize that everything we were told and just took at face value would truly be some of the most crucial info of understanding the world. As one of the new readers who only saw it as an interesting story to pass the time it truly caught me off guard on how great it was. I am so glad I picked it up and I hope the author keeps their health in check since they've been pumping so many updates for their books. Now I hope your day is really CHAOTICđđ(this is a joke for readers 700+đ ) And just because I'm bored check out Pancakes other storys because everything is important for the true plot
This is an incredible story with fun and loveable characters. The character development and world building puts most stories to shame. The main character's path is one I very much look forward to seeing where it will lead. Some of the level grinding is a bit slow and boring, but what level grinding isn't? I can't wait to see what happens next!
I really like how you combine several ideas from several stories while creating an unique magnificent story. I know some part of your novel looks like other novel or manga or anime that I know such as : Gate of Bjirmia--->Gate of Babylonia(Fate series) Split mind--->Kumo desu ga nani ka? Tensei Shitara Slime Datta ken Re:monster Remember, lot of famous writer get their inspiration from other people's creation and what makes it good is their talent to create something new and unique from those inspiration and you got that talent. Finally, I hope that you will never drop this novel cause lot of people want to see this novel's full story.