It's a great novel, although there are some flaws. The MC personality is pretty annoying, but you just need to tone him down a bit. The fight scenes are also pretty lackluster, how to say it, you don't feel the seriousness of it at all. Fight scenes are supposed to be exciting. Excluding that, the rest is great. It's a great idea and the history isn't rushed, the chapters are also of considerable length. Keep up the good work.
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