Reviews of Enjoying life in twilight
Enjoying life in twilight
DarknessAuthor
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- Writing Quality
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- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
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At the very beginning, I already had a call when he just wants to be a 16-year-old guy and that's it! Well, this is nonsense. You are either born and get used to your body, or then you will stick it all your life without understanding)))) Not really, why didn't he choose the old time? he could have prepared a lot in this world , and in general he does not have any ambitions . Why is he there ? He's like a degenerate!
The story overall is worthwhile reading. It does have it downs but still a decent read.Grammatically it is high above normal Webnovel standards but the sentence structure could use a little improvement.The story is pretty straightforward, die-get wishes-meet mate-trouble comes-deal with it easily-happily ever after. Predictable but still somewhat enjoyable.The characters feel a little empty, especially the OC's. Could've stretched the story a little bit and fleshed out some of the wolf pack characters and perhaps have more interactions with the shapeshifters. The MC does have the full wolf form after all. Gave one of the enemies a full chapter background only to have him killed pretty much instantly.The world is Twilight. Not much there to explain, but the travelling is done bad. At one point it the story the MC and his friend apparently travel from Forks, WA to the Volturi headquarters by running in a couple hours. That means they traveled across the US, the Atlantic ocean and half of Europe by running. So either the writer didn't do his homework or just made a mistake I don't know, but it did make the story feel sloppy.
character is garbage, absolutely unlikable unnecessarily detailed af and the details are useless i cant go a single second reading without cringing if i could given negative stars i would i understand that a fanfiction is supposed to be like a dream like or scenario for the author to share to others but at least try to make it good
Une fic merdique comme tant 'autre sur le thème de twilight Franchement un vampire paradis d'origine aurait sûrement eu des enfants vampire parfait et pq elle est pas curieuse des sorciere qu'il évoque C un menteur et un chien le mc on le vois au début de l'histoire Il déteste les cullens il y a aucune raison ,il le dit lui-même
First off writing is good not perfect but most on here usually aren’t. Updates could be better but now slow enough to lose interest. Story development…. is developing lol… The character design is cool I see a lot of people upset that he’s in a mate bond and think he’s changing but in reality he’s changed his mate just as much. It’s preferable to just say it’s not your cup of tea. Plus the MCs character didn’t really change it’s a difference between caring for your significant other and simping for a woman. Anyway I’m enjoying the story so far and look forward to more updates.
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i give this an average score. this is not a story i would usually read. it was entertaining, but probably not a book/fanfiction i would read a second time. the writing had many flaws, and many words missing in the sentences. the story was very cringe to be honest and it was going at a very fast pace, and don't have alot of depth.but it was still entertaining too say the least 3 stars.
