Review Detail of BookWorm in Enjoying life in twilight

The story overall is worthwhile reading. It does have it downs but still a decent read.Grammatically it is high above normal Webnovel standards but the sentence structure could use a little improvement.The story is pretty straightforward, die-get wishes-meet mate-trouble comes-deal with it easily-happily ever after. Predictable but still somewhat enjoyable.The characters feel a little empty, especially the OC's. Could've stretched the story a little bit and fleshed out some of the wolf pack characters and perhaps have more interactions with the shapeshifters. The MC does have the full wolf form after all. Gave one of the enemies a full chapter background only to have him killed pretty much instantly.The world is Twilight. Not much there to explain, but the travelling is done bad. At one point it the story the MC and his friend apparently travel from Forks, WA to the Volturi headquarters by running in a couple hours. That means they traveled across the US, the Atlantic ocean and half of Europe by running. So either the writer didn't do his homework or just made a mistake I don't know, but it did make the story feel sloppy.