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its been made pretty clear that death battle is very biased because mortals literally cannot touch soul reapers
i can understand that youre trying to add like a supporting character that acts like a supposed rival to make it more interesting but you did it by adding a younger character thats supposed to be way behind and the mc even has a x2 time advantage but you made the mc seem incompetent as if his older brother who is a decently experienced lord didnt train and spar with him those 3 new elite students made more sense as rivals are and are alot more memorable than any of the previous characters
a group of raven is an unkindness and a group of crows is called a murder a group of lemurs is called a conspiracy
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