Reviews of Divine Talent Born Mortal

I enjoy it, however the broken English is hard at times, I can translate in my head the general meaning but it doesn’t flow smoothly. At chapter 20 currently

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I always wanted to write a story so here it is if anyone has a tip to give writers in the comments and only review if it is to talk about the content.

Couldn’t read more than a page or two due to have absolutely bad the translation was. I have to assume a lot of it was also just cropped out because it felt like words were missing that were needed on top of it being badly translated

Eu amei! A história vai melhorando a cada capítulo, te envolve a querer saber mais dos personagens e da trama em si. Para mim está sendo uma leitura envolvente!

Cultivation stages or system and world background are not explained enough from what i've read. The character design is decent. Story Development is quite fast at the start from what i read but the main problem is the horrible broken english and grammatical mistakes it's horrible to read but the plot or story idea is the best part of this novel if someone can tell me when the english gets better or if it does i will endure and read it but if it doesn't get any better i'll drop it since this level of horrible english is something i hate in novels as i like smoother english or at least a little above avarage level english to read so please someone tell me so i know if i would waste my coins and time or if it could be worth it

The concepts from what I can tell are good and interesting however like the author mentioned the grammar and the like are what hold the book back

Good book, with a nice start that is not very standard. Rarely do we see MCs like that. There is only one issue with this book, that will make A LOT of people drop it - it's grammar/english level. It's APPALING, it's like reading some unedited MTL, so unless you have decent english skills or you don't mind reading broken english, don't start reading, you will only feel bad, that a decent book got ruined.

Can you please tell me if the grammer has improved now or is it still the same ? Cuz I've read some older comments saying that the grammer is too bad.

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Droped because the language makes it impossible for me to enjoy this book. Except of the language the progression is all right, the world is ok the characters seem a little weak, and the book is already finished.

Very fun and good novel if you like allies or a girl you eat a piece you are welcome And I eat bread in a cheese sandwich sandwich a cheese sandwich salad and bread sandwich and bread salad

Some sentences were incomprehensible because of some grammatical errors here and there. Some spelling errors of names and other words due to hasty typing.

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While the story is good, the inconsistency is impossible to over look. Even seeing two different names fir the same realm in the same paragraph isnt that uncommon. I also feel like the story is progressing a bit too quickly and it can get confusing.

the plot of the book is actually good, its just the story is full of errors. I don't know why it has yet to be edited when it is clear that it should be. personally think this should be wrote to make sense and to fix the many errors

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