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DC Hero The Paladin

Leon Hardins is just your average boy. when he died he was sent to the void and was given a power. and be a Hero of the DV universe. Join him in his adventures. This is my first novel, So ho easy on me ok.

James_Raynor · Anime & Comics
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I will try my best.

Hey Guys James here. I'm sorry if I was rushing things and can't make the mc more relatable. as a new writer I don't have experience on how the story should be structured.

but I will try to remedy it as soon as possible

with that out of the way. I'm going to change the power level of the mc.

I won't follow cultivation power scaling. to me it's just setting up to be op later on and none can defeat the mc as the novel progress.

but one of the comments, said that I need a sort of power scaling. technically, Uther is my sort of system. his memories are what guides the mc to get Skills. and his control of the light is what makes those skills, stronger.

so the mc new power System as what I called it is gonna be this.

Level System. for example.

Divine Shield lvl 1. Becomes invulnerable for 1 second.

Divine lvl 2, Divine Shield lvl 3 and so forth.

to level these skills, he needs control in that power.

but this is all I have for now. but I will try my best.

Thank you for those comments.