Reviews of deleteed010

I normally don't like reading fantasy/magic-based stories, but I really enjoy reading this one. The MC is mad OP but is also very likeable. Great work on the writing quality, too, author. The story flows smoothly from scene to scene and is well paced.👍

First of all, congratulations for giving your best and write more than seventy chaps. Also, I liked the premise of the story. I hope you continue to write. Unimportant Note: I didn't understand why you think that chaps with less than 2k words are long, most of chinese webnovels have around this number of Words/Chap. To me, long chaps are about 3k or more.

Hope Arthur makes it to the top in the end and finds the person who did him wrong, also keep writing your story and take notes from lots of power fantasies like this.

This was a great read. The storyline is awesome and I love the way the reader describes the way the events unfold. However, there are quite some errs in each chapter; run on run sentences, too long paragraphs, well that's all. I love the fact that you incorporated magic into your story. Overall, it's a beautiful story 🖤

The plot is really interesting and amazing! The writing quality is great too! I love it a lot! It's getting interesting. Keep updating this good work!

It is a great novel! A very good execution of the story considering the background of the story. I am looking forward to upcoming chapters! Keep going ;)

Nice story! Feels different vibe! Synopsis was very interesting and plot is well defined. Sure want to read further more! Keep it up! I cheer you!

This is definitely entertaining. From the first chapter, I can feel myself being in the protagonist's situation. The author did a good job playing every scene out. This is a masterpiece. I will be sure to read this story to the very end. Kudos to you, author. You did a fantastic job

I think that the idea of this novel is really well put together. I love when a character's power builds intrigue both in others and themselves. I only had one thing to critique, and that was your sentences can verge on the longer side, which can make prose a bit confusing at times. It in no way took away from the plot. Definitely a novel ill come back to later

I have read up to 20 chapters and I just say this story is quite good. there isn't really much focus on character development and not much world building either, but I assume that will change as the story plays out. keep up the great work.

This book has great potential and interesting characters, The plot is engaging and the magic system is very nice too. I can see that this book will go places as long as the author keeps up the good work.

The story and worldbuilding is realy interesting so far and I love to read it! This story needs to be edited though, as there are a couple errors in the writing.

Amazing plot. The synopsis is enough to intrigue to continue this book. The author has done amazing work and made this book reader friendly since the very start. Moreover, wishing you luck 🤞

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I liked the lead character a lot. The emotions and his struggles surrounded by people who tormented him are well portrayed. The world building is excellent. Looking forward on how the story proceeds. Good work!

The story setting is great howe ver I would like the author to keep the paragraph a little shorter so that it would be a fun read. There were some fun elements here and there which is great as well. Keep going author.

Just reading a few chapters and I can't just stop! This novel does well. Love the storyline and the unique plot. The MC is not your typical character with a cliché personality. Overall, this is a very good piece of work. To the author, keep updating!

The world building is phenomenal. The main character is strong but the chapters at the start of the novel have many formation and grammatical mistakes. As readers, we can get the idea of what the author is trying to convey but the mistakes are still there. Some things strangely seems forced but if you keep reading, you will definitely enjoy the story. We could clearly see the author's imagination and purpose in the story and it gives many different vibes like HP, TBATE and I sometimes felt TAPOV vibes too. It is a really good read so anyone who liked real powerful mc in a magic world should give this a try.

I'm always a big fan of really descriptive storyline. Even if it is lengthy it makes you aware of the character (s) going through in the given situation. i really enjoyed reading the story so far. good work author-san 👍

First of all im going to steal your liver, love. Why? Because I stubbed my pinky toe while reading this but it was worth it because I really enjoyed it and even though im like 5-7 charts in am very interested in it! Even tho it's giving me Hermes System vibes... Okay that all. Keep up the awesome job! I'm going to keep reading and grown my mind since I don't have a brain!