Review Detail of Blooddoctor in deleteed010

Item: deleteed010
Rating: 4.4

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BlooddoctorLv132yrBlooddoctor

This was a great read. The storyline is awesome and I love the way the reader describes the way the events unfold. However, there are quite some errs in each chapter; run on run sentences, too long paragraphs, well that's all. I love the fact that you incorporated magic into your story. Overall, it's a beautiful story 🖤

deleteed010

AMonarch

Liked it!

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AMonarchAuthorAMonarch

Are the errors in the first 5 chapters or after because the first 5 chapters are fully edited to my knowledge. Only large blocks are from dialogue, so if possible could you clarify if the errors in the writing in the first 5 chapters or afterward?

2yr

BlooddoctorLv13Blooddoctor

I mentioned what the errors were. They include run on run sentences and long paragraph.

AMonarch:Are the errors in the first 5 chapters or after because the first 5 chapters are fully edited to my knowledge. Only large blocks are from dialogue, so if possible could you clarify if the errors in the writing in the first 5 chapters or afterward?

2yr