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Hi all, my nickname is Celix and i enjoy writing fantasy novels. feel free to dm me in discord. Celix#3595
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Will change it now! This was the time i just copy pasta from my draft n that time it was written as orc. To go with the story i changed it to goblin at the spot. Everything is alright from chapter 2.
Goblins* . Sorry I thought i already changed all of them during my last check. Thanks for pointing out.
Hi guys, I hope you enjoy reading Yumeko-chan. I created this novel so that everyone will have good laughter and time reading it. It have a simple plot and the story itself revolves around the main character Princess-Yumeko and her daily sufferings. Special shoutout to my Ravenfalls's readers to follow me here in my new work. Everyone, have a great time reading "When will Yumeko-chan ever stop suffering?"
Ok, the introduction was interesting along with the subsequent detailed explanation as well. But it would be nice for the readers if you seperate the dialogue for each character seperately in different paragraph, not jumbling up the dialogues for manay characters at once. Otherwise it is a really good story with huge potential. Good work.
This is my first time reading a sci fi novel and i gotta say the story is really and captivating. Bravo to the author for making it simple and understanding m i mostly avoid sci-fi novels since most of the times the story tends to bring complicated plot. Keep up the good work and update it regularly.