Reviews of deleteed010

I loved the story, the plot, and the characters. The writing in the first few chapters flows very smoothly and it is captivating. The pacing is excellent as well.

the way an important heart breaking incident is depicted hooks the attention of readers.the writing style and pace suited well for the plot,character development..keep up the good work

This is an attention stealer, a focus grabber. Very much worth reading. There’s so much to look forward to and a lead you can’t help but root for and just can’t help but love. GREAT WORK!!!

This is a good book I must say. Although am not done reading it but the few chapters I've read so far is great. I recommend this book to anyone looking for a good book.

The author did a really great work here. This book is a 10/10 for me. I really enjoyed reading every single chapter in this book. It is an amazing piece.

AMAZANG!! The novel is SO good, it's incorporates the genre i love most, weak to strong, hiding powers, revenge, you name it! still haven't finished it though but DEFINITELY added to my library![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I kept reading from the moment I opened this book. The flow was effortless and it was very easy to read. I was completely emersed into the story I found myself reading chapter after chapter. Great writting skills.

Supernatural beings, magic, demons, face slapping. I am so much in love it. For those who are into something like this, I encourage you to add this book. Its motivating and makes one blood pump. Go go Arthur!!!!!!

Started a bit slow, but quickly picked up pace as it started to get more interesting, especially the magic aspect of it. I like how the novel handled the aspect of magic, and how it the main character interacted with it.

if you stumbled here while looking for a food read, intense and interesting chapters that you can't get enough and kept you longing for more? Then, you're in a right place.

I’m interested in seeing what happens when Arthur come fully into his own. I love how he goes from not caring to having them all at his mercy . Can’t wait to see if he finds out about his parents . Look out Arthur is a force to be reckoned with.

OP magic users, creepy cloaked figures, mysterious shadow council of magic users, messed up school system. There is a lot going on, likely something for everyone. The idea is interesting, hopefully Arthur will be able to find the answers he is looking for and change his life for the better.

I usually don't read these kinds of novels, but this one was interesting and had good grammar, I will keep reading this book, great work author!

Very detailed story that opens up with a very tense (and heart wrenching scene). I appreciate the level of detail provided, and although I would suggest more dialog intermingled throughout the narrative to speed up the pacing, it didn’t take away from the story at all. Overall, I loved this, it’s in my library and I will stay tuned for more updates!

While the writing and descriptions can be really well done, it does suffer a bit in the aspects of their structure. For instance, the first scentence was way too long and contrived to read it correctly. However, there is clear indication that the writer has care and love for the world he is trying to create

I think you need to let the characters speak for themselves. The paragraph where the father couldn't believe someone so low bested his son. Was powerful. Why? because real people act that way. Never forget the humanity in your characters is more important than the powers they possess

Great story! The main character is really interesting. I did find the start pretty annoying, as unreasonable characters just make me angry for some reason. Though it was just a temporary mechanic and the Mc gets some real character development and other good stuff down the road. Either way. it's really awesome. Best of luck with the story!

Woowww Loving the world you have built the story already got me hooked right into... The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed. Can't really wait to read what happens next!!

Though I haven't read all the chapters yet, it's actually good from what I've read so far. Well, what can I say except that this author actually knows his stuff. The synopsis gives you a lot of ideas about the story. I just hope the quality remains consistent in the future. Hey author, just one question though. Will this exceed 500 chaps?

This book is immersive. The writing quality of this book is superior. The character design, world background, they are perfect. Way to go, author!