I am a picky reader, but I was pulled in by the opening and found myself flying through this book. Like others have said, a few revisions will really make this shine. I can definitely see and feel the imagery that the author is trying to convey. The POV appears to be 3rd person omnicisient, where the narrator explains everything from a god’s eye view. This is a tricky method to get right without committing the son of author intrusion and pulling the reader out of the story, so again, I commend the author for the effort. Keep going! 🙂🙂

Thank you!

First off the author has an expansive vocabulary. These pages are full of medical terms and multi-syllable words. The story is interesting but the scenes are very granular, lots of internal monologue making the pace a bit slow. I am curious how this plays out so I think I’ll add it to my library and stick with it for a while.

Thank you so much for the insightful review and comments!

I was fully engaged during the first chapter, the scene was tense and gritty, but the pace seemed to slow down a bit in the later chapters. I assume we are still early on in the story and that might explains why I’m not sure what direction it’s heading, but overall I love this, and I LOVE the author’s fearless writing style. Nicely done!

Well that took an interesting turn!

This… your story is what I’ve been looking for.

What a way to open up the first scene. So many feelings right now. Wow! I love your style.

You will probably think I’m a noob but I just realized where you placed this comment! I’m still getting used to navigating through webnovel. I did want to say that I really like your writing style, and again, I appreciate your input.

You are absolutely right. I think my goal was to begin this scene in a very dark place and have the reader rooting for the FL when she finally found the strength to fight back. I appreciate your input!

I am new to these types of novels and I wanted to give it a fair look so I took my time with it. The author’s prose is 10/10, and while I’ve only read a few of these, the quick pacing had me flying through the pages. I appreciate the explanations at the beginning. It’s n my library so I can dive into this world again if I’m feeling squirrelly.

Excellent, skilled writing, captivating story. I love all things werewolves (especially the hellish, non-glamorous types) and this is a really cool take on them. This one is definitely going into the library. Looking forward to more chapters!

This is who I think of when I see the name Daenerys. Is that the point?

Thank you for your honest opinion!

Rich narrative, good dialog and a story that hooks you in and keeps you reading. I’m not usually someone who reads this genre but I’m going to stick with this one and see where it leads. Nicely done, author!

Excellent opening, pacing is spot on. I love this!

This is good, but should be given the reader more information here? Will the editor have a larger role in the story? If so, giving him/her a name and making this person more relatable might help. Just a thought. [img=recommend]

Great opening… Makes the reader ask lots of questions.

😂 welcome, and thank you!

Thank you for the kind words!